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    Bette Forgets 12

    Story written on April 9, 2005 by rebakathy1.
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    Bette identifies Gracy and then something weird happens.

    *Tina*

    I watch as Bette identifies the right man, one of the men that attacked her. Something was off with her though. It was like she didnt want to identify Gracy, like she wanted to let him go. This couldnt be it though. This man did horrible things to her.

    Uh…Bette I have a weird request for you, I hear Hallows hesitantly ask and I turn to him as Bette does

    What is it, Bette asks softly

    Gracy would only give up his buddies on one condition.

    Oh this doesnt sound good.

    He wants to see me, Bette supplied

    Hallows seemed caught off guard by this statement as I am.

    Yes, he answers, Gracy will only give up the others if he sees you.

    Okay, Bette answers with a ***** of her head

    What, both Hallows and myself ask

    Its not like I have to talk to the man or anything is it? I just go in there, let him see me and go home, she shrugs at this, Lets do it so that I can go home and take a nap.

    Hallows opens and closes his mouth a moment and then shrugs himself, Everyone leave except for number five, he comments through the intercom

    I watch as all of them men leave the room except for Gracy. I watch him for a moment. Such a young man and to be facing the death at what he did. I am certainly shocked when I see him smile. What an odd thing to do at a time like this.

    This way, Hallows states opening the door and leading us out into the hall and down a little and opening another door

    We walk into the room that holds the monster that attacked my love and almost took her life. I have to concentrate really hard and tell myself that attacking this man wouldnt be worth it. Hallows must sense my mood as he sticks close to me as Bette walks closer to Gracy and stands in front of him.

    What the ***** is she doing?

    They are just standing in front of each other staring.

    Youre alive, Gracy whispers

    Im alive, Bette answers

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    8. I loved every word. It was so moving but hard to describe. Love, hate and forgiveness are the thoughts that come to mind. Thank you ! You are the best writer. Hands down!

    9. You should be so so proud – this was awesome. I work with a lot of survivors of violence and the strength you portray is real as well as the vulnerability. Thanks for doing such a fabulous job.

    11. reba_kathy – wow. This must have taken alot out of you. I was crying and so thankful you saved me with your last line. That was a nice touch.

      Thanks for spending the time and energy for this chapter. I have read about this “bond” between victim and suspect; you captured very well.

      I can’t wait for you to continue this story, hopefully with happier moments?!

    13. You have a lot to be proud of this is excellent story telling thanks for sharing this well written great story. Rest up we are anxiously waiting for more.

    17. If that section was this hard for me to read, I can’t even imagine how you managed to write it. Weird stuff but utterly intriguing. The different points of view weave together so nicely to advance the story. I’m so loving your work! Thank you.

    18. Wonderful! You should be proud. This was a great chapter and I loved that you left on a lite note. This story is just great. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    20. Finally an update:D yay *bounces around*
      I do understand Bettes move with Gracey, even tho there is still this tiny thought that says: WTF?..amazing story. i am already addicted, pls more very soon!

    25. well well Raba…you sure know how to give us a smile in the end.
      This is so wonderfull a story – can´t wait for an update. Please let us have some more very soon

    26. Your Bette is so interesting as she has this surreal quality about her. Maybe it’s from her near life experience which allows her a different reality but whatever it is I love it thanks.

    28. Wow, that was some intense moments between Bette and Gracy (that is his name, right? oh well.) It’s good though, no one really understands what someone goes thru something as dramatic as being violated and closed to death. I was happy for the way Bette handled it, though. Great writing, and insight.

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