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    Bette Forgets 12

    Story written on April 9, 2005 by rebakathy1.
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    Bette identifies Gracy and then something weird happens.

    Im glad, says Gracy

    As am I.

    Im sorry about that, he points to her neck, They did that while I was gone.

    I know, Bette comments touching her neck, They thought you were weakening.

    I was.

    I know this too.

    I glance at detective Hallows and see him staring at this in wide eyed…fascination perhaps?

    You did the right thing, says Bette

    I know.

    Youll tell us where they are?

    215 Worthington Road, Dear Lake, California, Gracy remarks not taking his eyes from Bette

    I watch as Hallows points at the other officer in the room and motions him out of the room. Presumably to get a team together to bring these guys in. I turn back to Bette and this monster in time to see her smile at him.

    Holy *****!

    Thank you, says Bette

    Gracy inclines his head in welcome, I await my fate, he says softly

    Its what you deserve, says Bette

    It is at that, he agrees, I will go to it knowing that I did the right thing in the end.

    You will go to it knowing that you have a son, Bette says softly

    My jaw hits the floor at this as does Hallows I observe glancing over at him. I take it from his expression he didnt know that Bette was pregnant. How the ***** does Bette know her baby is Gracys and that shes having a son? This is all getting a little too surreal for me.

    I have a son, Gracy repeats

    He gets a nod from Bette.

    Dont tell him about me. I want you and Tina to raise him as your own. I need for him to grow up and be a far better man than I ever was.

    We will raise him to be a wonderful man, Bette remarks with a nod, Understanding, calm, smart…everything.

    Gracy nods his head, Thank you for this…Bette.

    Bette inclines her head at this, Your welcome.

    This seems to break some weird bond and she turns to me and smiles. Going over to me we walk out of the room with her not even giving Gracy a backward glance.

    Weird!

    Are you okay, I ask Bette once my voice has returned

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    8. I loved every word. It was so moving but hard to describe. Love, hate and forgiveness are the thoughts that come to mind. Thank you ! You are the best writer. Hands down!

    9. You should be so so proud – this was awesome. I work with a lot of survivors of violence and the strength you portray is real as well as the vulnerability. Thanks for doing such a fabulous job.

    11. reba_kathy – wow. This must have taken alot out of you. I was crying and so thankful you saved me with your last line. That was a nice touch.

      Thanks for spending the time and energy for this chapter. I have read about this “bond” between victim and suspect; you captured very well.

      I can’t wait for you to continue this story, hopefully with happier moments?!

    13. You have a lot to be proud of this is excellent story telling thanks for sharing this well written great story. Rest up we are anxiously waiting for more.

    17. If that section was this hard for me to read, I can’t even imagine how you managed to write it. Weird stuff but utterly intriguing. The different points of view weave together so nicely to advance the story. I’m so loving your work! Thank you.

    18. Wonderful! You should be proud. This was a great chapter and I loved that you left on a lite note. This story is just great. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    20. Finally an update:D yay *bounces around*
      I do understand Bettes move with Gracey, even tho there is still this tiny thought that says: WTF?..amazing story. i am already addicted, pls more very soon!

    25. well well Raba…you sure know how to give us a smile in the end.
      This is so wonderfull a story – can´t wait for an update. Please let us have some more very soon

    26. Your Bette is so interesting as she has this surreal quality about her. Maybe it’s from her near life experience which allows her a different reality but whatever it is I love it thanks.

    28. Wow, that was some intense moments between Bette and Gracy (that is his name, right? oh well.) It’s good though, no one really understands what someone goes thru something as dramatic as being violated and closed to death. I was happy for the way Bette handled it, though. Great writing, and insight.

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