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    Bette Forgets 14

    Story written on April 15, 2005 by rebakathy1.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=53241
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    More therapy and Bette remembers something she wishes she could forget. (Everyone now…Dun…dun…dunnnnnnnnn!)

    He said he would go get something descent for me to wear and then he would take me out of this place. I knew the footsteps clomping down the stairs and my breathing starts to heighten as my panic builds. I know those steps and I know he wants to kill me. Where is Gracy? I try to remain as still as I can as not to reveal my state of awareness but the trembling my body is going through gives me away.

    I see that youre awake, Vircome sneers at me

    I neednt be awake to see his ever present sneer.

    Open your eyes *****.

    Slowly opening my eyes I lift my head to stare up at him and this is when I see the glint of metal. This evil held a blade of six inches of twisted steel that reflected off what little light shown in my *****. Looking up in his eyes of fire I knew that I would not be getting out of here. Sending off the last of my hopes and dreams for this life I welcomed the eternal fortitude of fate.

    Vircome sneered once again at my reaction to this and stepped forward grabbing my head by my hair and yanking my head back. At this point the true nature of this man shown through, he was evil incarnate. Before I hadnt been so sure because Id seen glimpse, small tiny fractures in his armor that revealed he was human. Now, looking in his eyes I saw that there was nothing left. No humanity.

    Any last words?

    I may be welcoming of my death but I am still Bette Porter after all, ***** you, I spat

    Ah I see we still have some of that fire. Itll serve you well *****.

    Tilting my head back even further I felt the cold, cruel steel bite into my flesh just under my left ear. I stare this evil, this demon in the eyes as he cuts through my life force.~

    I come back to awareness coughing and look up to see a glass of water thrust at me. Taking the glass in both hands I quickly down the entire glass. Once the coughing subsides I look up to see Doctor Williams standing in front of me with a slightly stunned reaction on her face.

    Are you okay, she asks me softly

    I nod my head as she goes back to her seat all the while looking at me intently.

    What was that, she asks of me softly

    A memory…of this, I remark pointing to the scar in my neck

    She takes in a deep breath, I think we should end for today Bette.

    I nod my head at this, I think thats a good idea.

    She stands up and comes over helping me to my feet.

    I want you to set up and appointment for Monday.

    Okay.

    This has been very productive. Try not to dwell too much on what just happened.

    Ill try Doctor but its pretty big.

    I agree.

    Ill make that appointment.

    Ill see you then Bette.

    Smiling I left the office to see Tina tuck her book in her bag and stand up, Is everything okay?

    Great, I remark with a smile and can tell she doesnt believe me, Later. Please?

    Okay. Later.

    TBC…Hope you liked.

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    6. You must have read my mind because I was hoping you would post this one. Great as always and I felt I was a witness to her horrible crime. Please continue!

    9. THE POWER OF THIS CHAPTER WAS SO STRONG. I FELT SO MUCH FOR BETTE LIKE I WAS THERE …LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS CHAPTER INCREDIBLE JOB PLEASE POST SOON…..

    11. Girl, this chapter was awesome. And yes, you really were waxing poetic on this one. It was filled so much imagery. It’s sad for bette, but it’s really good writing. Loved this part:

      Slowly opening my eyes I lift my head to stare up at him and this is when I see the glint of metal. This evil held a blade of six inches of twisted steel that reflected off what little light shown in my hell. Looking up in his eyes of fire I knew that I would not be getting out of here. Sending off the last of my hopes and dreams for this life I welcomed the eternal fortitude of fate.

      Can’t wait for your next post!

    12. I’m glad you wrote, “I hope you liked” and not “I hope you enjoyed,” because that was so intense that my heart is racing and I’m shaking. Oh my God, rk1, this writing is amazing. The descriptive language kicks ass (how’s that for inarticulate?!) and the dialogue continues to move the story so incredibly well. Your stories engage me so completely; thank you so much for bringing such a broad range of emotions and experiences to this work. Pat yourself on the back for me, okay? Thanks.

    14. One word to describe this chapter is…DEEP. It just cuts through the core. I loved it…so much emotions…the way you described the cutting of Bette’s throat…idk…it’s like I was there, I felt her pain. Truly poetic…wonderful chapter Reba, thank you. Please update soon;)

    18. I was just catching up and wow what a great story you have going here and you tell it so well. Thanks I can’t believe you Bette she is sooooo brave. THanks

    20. This was an incredible awesome chapter, love it. I’m so glad the cops catch these 2 jackass and can’t wait to see they going hell. Bette remember some of horrible stuff and I feel so bad for her. Post soon, thank you! Excellent chapter!

    23. “Waxing poetic” — indeed! Your use of imagery, very well done. It was more like watching your story unfold, then actually reading. Great Job! Thank you.

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