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    Bette Forgets 14

    Story written on April 15, 2005 by rebakathy1.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=53241
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    More therapy and Bette remembers something she wishes she could forget. (Everyone now…Dun…dun…dunnnnnnnnn!)

    *Tina*

    I am sitting reading the book I brought, the new Mary Higgins Clark, when my cell phone rings. I grab at it before it could disturb anyone in the room. Looking at the caller id I see that its Detective Hallows.

    Ben what can I do for you, I say answering the phone

    I am just calling you with some great news, he says and it sounds like hes in a helicopter
    Whats that, I ask curiously

    We caught them Tina, we freaking caught them!

    At first Im not sure what hes talking about and when it sinks in I smile widely, You are shitting me!

    I dont care about the looks I get from those around me. Im just so excited that these men were finally caught and that they were going to get what they deserved.

    Im serious. We just did a sting on the cabin that Gracy told us about. They were still there and we have taken them into custody.

    Thats wonderful news Ben, just amazing. Are you on your way home now?

    Yeah, were flying these guys back to home base now. We had a brief disagreement with the Deer Lake police because they were all like you found these guys in our jurisdiction and I went off on a rant saying how these men did a horrible, terrible crime in MY jurisdiction and that they should be ashamed of themselves for trying to keep these guys so that they could get their fifteen seconds of fame.

    I had to laugh at this, I bet they backed off real fast after that.

    Correct. We wont need Bette to identify these guys because we can have Gracy do it. Besides I dont think the meeting with these scumbags would go quite as well as it had with Gracy.

    I dont think so either. How is the request of Bettes for Gracy not getting the death penalty?

    Those around me were starting to look more closely at me and after I said this line they were staring at me in earnest. I tried not to let it bother me.

    Well my superiors arent exactly thrilled at the prospect of letting Gracy get out of having the death penalty but when the victim requests this it is somewhat harder to say no to then if a lawyer or someone else had requested it.

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    6. You must have read my mind because I was hoping you would post this one. Great as always and I felt I was a witness to her horrible crime. Please continue!

    9. THE POWER OF THIS CHAPTER WAS SO STRONG. I FELT SO MUCH FOR BETTE LIKE I WAS THERE …LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS CHAPTER INCREDIBLE JOB PLEASE POST SOON…..

    11. Girl, this chapter was awesome. And yes, you really were waxing poetic on this one. It was filled so much imagery. It’s sad for bette, but it’s really good writing. Loved this part:

      Slowly opening my eyes I lift my head to stare up at him and this is when I see the glint of metal. This evil held a blade of six inches of twisted steel that reflected off what little light shown in my hell. Looking up in his eyes of fire I knew that I would not be getting out of here. Sending off the last of my hopes and dreams for this life I welcomed the eternal fortitude of fate.

      Can’t wait for your next post!

    12. I’m glad you wrote, “I hope you liked” and not “I hope you enjoyed,” because that was so intense that my heart is racing and I’m shaking. Oh my God, rk1, this writing is amazing. The descriptive language kicks ass (how’s that for inarticulate?!) and the dialogue continues to move the story so incredibly well. Your stories engage me so completely; thank you so much for bringing such a broad range of emotions and experiences to this work. Pat yourself on the back for me, okay? Thanks.

    14. One word to describe this chapter is…DEEP. It just cuts through the core. I loved it…so much emotions…the way you described the cutting of Bette’s throat…idk…it’s like I was there, I felt her pain. Truly poetic…wonderful chapter Reba, thank you. Please update soon;)

    18. I was just catching up and wow what a great story you have going here and you tell it so well. Thanks I can’t believe you Bette she is sooooo brave. THanks

    20. This was an incredible awesome chapter, love it. I’m so glad the cops catch these 2 jackass and can’t wait to see they going hell. Bette remember some of horrible stuff and I feel so bad for her. Post soon, thank you! Excellent chapter!

    23. “Waxing poetic” — indeed! Your use of imagery, very well done. It was more like watching your story unfold, then actually reading. Great Job! Thank you.

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