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Bette Forgets 14
So they are going to listen to her?
It looks like. Now the other two arent going to be so lucky. We have a written statement by Gracy detailing the whole ordeal. It seriously makes me want to strangle these guys, but strangely Gracy had little to do with any of this. I actually believe him when he says that the only thing he did was to rape Bette. I know thats horrifying in and of itself but if that was the only thing
I understand, I remarked actually understanding where he was coming from with this
Anyway I need to go were going to be landing soon. I wanted to let you and Bette be the first that was told.
Thank you Ben.
Your welcome Tina, give Bette my best.
Will do.
I hung up with him with a smile knowing things were finally working out in our favor.
*Bette*
How does it feel to be pregnant with the child of a rapist, Williams asks me
Well that is certainly to the point now isnt it?
Uhgreat, I remark after a moment, How the heck do you think it feels? Im upset that I got pregnant in such the way that I did but Im glad Im going to have a child.
I dont mean to upset you, Williams remarked softly bringing those mesmerizing green eyes up to me
Im not upset. Some of your questions are just kind of stupid is all.
She smiled faintly at this, Yes they are arent they? What do you remember of the attack Bette?
This was the first time she ever used me name. Weird. What do I remember of the attack?
Vague pieces, I start, Theres what I told you earlier. I remember them attacking me at my car, I pause as I think about her question
~Gracy told me that they were letting me go. I rejoice in this fact as I struggle to remain conscious and upright. It is tempting to let the weight of my body fall against the sore and strained muscles of my arms, but I knew I could not do this. Upon hearing the door creak open I listen intently for the tell tale footsteps of him, Gracy but it is not him.
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(53 votes, average: 3.91 out of 5)
Jeez, that was a really really powerful chapter. I love your writing, especially the line about the knife.
Keep posting for us!
you put us in the room with Bette while she was being used and abused, Wonderful writing, thaaaaank
Wow very powerful writing I could really feel for Bette please continue..Excellent writing
Thats hard core stuff, wow I can’t even think about how your story is bring so much reality to what type of people committe hate crimes.
Wow, what an incredible job. You had us right there with Bette. Love this story. Please hurry with the next chapter.
You must have read my mind because I was hoping you would post this one. Great as always and I felt I was a witness to her horrible crime. Please continue!
I felt like I was there in the room with Bette. This was a great chapter. Please continue!!!
Tough stuff. Nicely done.
THE POWER OF THIS CHAPTER WAS SO STRONG. I FELT SO MUCH FOR BETTE LIKE I WAS THERE …LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS CHAPTER INCREDIBLE JOB PLEASE POST SOON…..
Great job! keep writing please.
Girl, this chapter was awesome. And yes, you really were waxing poetic on this one. It was filled so much imagery. It’s sad for bette, but it’s really good writing. Loved this part:
Slowly opening my eyes I lift my head to stare up at him and this is when I see the glint of metal. This evil held a blade of six inches of twisted steel that reflected off what little light shown in my hell. Looking up in his eyes of fire I knew that I would not be getting out of here. Sending off the last of my hopes and dreams for this life I welcomed the eternal fortitude of fate.
Can’t wait for your next post!
I’m glad you wrote, “I hope you liked” and not “I hope you enjoyed,” because that was so intense that my heart is racing and I’m shaking. Oh my God, rk1, this writing is amazing. The descriptive language kicks ass (how’s that for inarticulate?!) and the dialogue continues to move the story so incredibly well. Your stories engage me so completely; thank you so much for bringing such a broad range of emotions and experiences to this work. Pat yourself on the back for me, okay? Thanks.
Are you going to finish this story??
One word to describe this chapter is…DEEP. It just cuts through the core. I loved it…so much emotions…the way you described the cutting of Bette’s throat…idk…it’s like I was there, I felt her pain. Truly poetic…wonderful chapter Reba, thank you. Please update soon;)
Wow that was detailed, it like you could really visualize the act happening. Good Job.
This is such an intense and brilliant story incredibly well written. I love it
Deep and intense.
Also, written very well.
I was just catching up and wow what a great story you have going here and you tell it so well. Thanks I can’t believe you Bette she is sooooo brave. THanks
Ohh yes Reba. We just can´t get enough of your stories. Post soon
This was an incredible awesome chapter, love it. I’m so glad the cops catch these 2 jackass and can’t wait to see they going hell. Bette remember some of horrible stuff and I feel so bad for her. Post soon, thank you! Excellent chapter!
you are doing a great job with this store it is my fav. Wirte more soon please
WOW pretty darn good can’t wait for the next chapter, I love your story.
“Waxing poetic” — indeed! Your use of imagery, very well done. It was more like watching your story unfold, then actually reading. Great Job! Thank you.
very very powerful.
Anxiously waiting for your next chapters. Great story. Please keep up with this one.