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Bette Forgets 17
Porter-Kennard residence this is Porter, I speak cheerily into the receiver
I see Tina roll her eyes.
Hi Bette this is Ben, says Ben Hallows
Hey Ben how goes it, I ask
Tina smiles at me and leaves to go put the groceries away or something to give me some privacy.
I have an odd request to ask you, he says and I hear his uncertainty
What is it, I ask really very curious
Gracy wants to see you.
Now that wasnt what I was expecting at this point in time.
Why?
He wont say why. Just that he needs to see you. I told him that I would run it passed you.
I sigh softly at this. The trial for the three men had lasted only a month with the evidence against the men being iron clad. The jury had deliberated for ten whole minutes before the guilty verdict was announced. Actually it took them less than a minute to decide the guilt and the rest they discussed whether the three should get the death penalty or not. Vircome and Meyers definitely got the death penalty vote but as per my wishes Gracy did not get death.
Isnt he in that maximum security prison, I ask getting up and going into the bathroom once again to get some water to was out my mouth again
He is yes.
And he wants to see me, I repeat not fully grasping this yet
Gracy and I had agreed that the meeting we had where I identified him as one of my attackers would be our very last face to face meeting. Of course I saw him during the trial but we were never alone.
You dont have to do it B, Ben says using the nickname he had grown fond of as the two of them had become good friends, I promised him that I would tell you and I have fulfilled that promise.
I frown at this while I look in the mirror. Im starting to realize that I am myself, this woman staring back at me is well…me.
Ill do it, I say surprising myself by agreeing to it
You will, Ben asks just as surprised as I am
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(49 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
I feel as if some ominous music should be playing. Nice little bits of lots of things in this one.
Loved it nothing more left to say.
WOW!!! That was NICE! lol…. I did guess the bedroom but not the Chair in the bedroom! hahaha.. but so think about the kitchen counter thing we talked about!..GREAT JOB!!!
I was scared to finish reading the story cause I knew how it going to end. Not knowing what Gracy wanted. So hurry with next chapter. Good Job.
Vulnerable, recently hurt, traumatized Bette alone again with Gracy — in a “maximum security prison.” This doesn’t feel right. Let’s hope Tina’s love and Ben’s support will add to her strength. Please post soon. Can’t wait for the update.
I just caught up with your story. Bette at 22 sure is different than Bette at 40. Though just as sexy, evidently. :) Keep the chapters coming, please.
I love this story. The sex just adds to the amazingness. I believe I’ll be needing a cold shower (alone sadly haha) Please continue!
alrighty….you must post tonight…..i totally cannot wait a few days for the update…….wondering what he wants……oh please..please…please….
I love this story… can’t wait for your up date… lets hope this is it for gracy…we need more..
BETTE & TINA LOVING IS ALWAYS GOOD…GREAT CHAPTER SO HAPPY YOU POSTED BETTE FORGETS EVEN THOUGH I LOVE ALSO
Great chapter. Bette and Tina are so in love and they can’t stop doing it. What’s Gracy want, is he want to say goodbye to her and tell her to take care and take care of his child. Post soon, thank you!
Wow this bette/gracey thing is weird, how could they have this bond as strong as they do?? Keep going
hey that was nice. I really like this Bette she is still the cute one. thanksie!!!
SORRY,GOT OUT OF CONTROL. I ALOS LOVE A DIFFERENT BEGINNING..PLEASE POST BEFORE YOU GO ON VACATION..
Geez, I wish my showers are that exciting!!…LOVED IT!!…So SEXY IN LOVE!!…Wonder what Gracy wants?…Hacome Bette didn’t want Tina to go with her to see Gracy?…I guess I’ll just have to wait and see=D…more NC-17, you so rock with these scenes!!
This is a great story :)
How come Bette didn’t want Tina there – she must suspect what is going to happen isn’t going to make Tina happy. Good chapter.
Okay so where is your crystal ball.
Are you a bona fide fortune teller?
This story has Bette with child and guess what, joyfully so is Jennifer Beals abet in much happier circumstances. Spooky!
As for this chapter, Awww sweet. I adore the way Tina and Bette interact and prove their love for one another.
Personally I feel that Bette want to showw herself that she can deal with Gracy on her own and not force Tina to witness this. Bette knows how difficult this has been for Tina and just want to protect her love.
Can’t wait for your next post. All your ways are wonderful and I always enjoy reading them.
Thank you.
A fan.
that was a great update post soon please:-)
I should be in bed but your story caught my eye. Another great one! I loved it and this is my favorite as you well know. I have a question though, where have I heard that word, that particular word, thanksie before????
I absolutely positively love your writing. You write so well, I feel like I’m watching tv instead of reading from a computer screen. I am currently following all three of your stories and check daily for updates. I was estatically surprised to see an update to ‘Bette Forgets’ since it is my favorite of the three. Can’t wait for more updates on whichever one you decide to update next. Great job!
OMG! I just looooovveee this story!!! Bette is so cute sometimes, I can see why they are all over each other so much…Hope the thing with Gracy isn’t going to be bad. It would be hard to watch Bette get hurt again. Thank you for this great story!
I love reading this story. I really feel as if I can see your characters and it feels as though your writing and mastery of imagery has keeps improving with each chapter. In my mind, I see Bette at 22. Even though I know she’s her real age, you write her with such childl-like (young adult like) enthusiasm that it really comes across that her mindset is back at age 22. I find it cute that she and Ben have forged a friendship despite this hell my beloved lady b had to endure. In my humble opinion you’ve come a mighty long way from the early chapters. And the sex scenes are great. Your usage of imagery makes the scenes really easy to read and get wrapped up in. HOTT. Thanks for that ;)I love your reading and I think you know that. Can’t wait to find out what Gracy wants.
Another amazing update on one of your many stories. Can´t wait to see what Cracy wan´t to say to Bette. Post soon and don´t leave us hanging here to long.