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Bette Forgets 17
I need to see what he wants Ben. This can be our final closure.
Are you sure about this?
No, but I need to do it. His testimony gave our case that slam dunk we needed. We at least owe him that.
I can hear Ben sigh, I suppose you are right on that. Do you think you can be out there today?
I just need to tell Tina and I should be out.
You know Im going with you right?
I wouldnt expect anything less, I say with high amusement, Say when are you going to propose to Stacy, I ask the question I know will make him uncomfortable
B weve only been going out for three months, came the same answer he give me every time I ask the question
I laugh at this, You are such a wuss. The two of you are perfect for one another, I say taking a sip of water and spitting it out, Everyone can see it.
*Ben*
I cant believe she starts this conversation every time we talk with one another. I cant believe that she know me so well. With a sigh of my own I decide to tell her the truth.
Actually, I plan on asking her on her birthday, I state and wait expectantly for what I know is coming
I hear the loud squeal Bette lets loose and I have to hold the hear away from my ear.
*Tina*
I am putting the groceries away letting Bette have her conversation with Ben in privacy. The two of them make an odd pair. They seem to know each other more then they themselves. I have long since stopped being jealous of this. I am just putting away the chocolate milk when I hear Bette. It sounds like a squeal. Quickly I go into the bedroom to see her jumping up and down in the bedroom and occasionally twirling around in excitement.
I still after six months cant get over how child like she still is. This still amuses me. I see her stop twirling and cover her mouth thrusting the phone at me as she runs into the bathroom. I put the phone to my ear.
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(49 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
I feel as if some ominous music should be playing. Nice little bits of lots of things in this one.
Loved it nothing more left to say.
WOW!!! That was NICE! lol…. I did guess the bedroom but not the Chair in the bedroom! hahaha.. but so think about the kitchen counter thing we talked about!..GREAT JOB!!!
I was scared to finish reading the story cause I knew how it going to end. Not knowing what Gracy wanted. So hurry with next chapter. Good Job.
Vulnerable, recently hurt, traumatized Bette alone again with Gracy — in a “maximum security prison.” This doesn’t feel right. Let’s hope Tina’s love and Ben’s support will add to her strength. Please post soon. Can’t wait for the update.
I just caught up with your story. Bette at 22 sure is different than Bette at 40. Though just as sexy, evidently. :) Keep the chapters coming, please.
I love this story. The sex just adds to the amazingness. I believe I’ll be needing a cold shower (alone sadly haha) Please continue!
alrighty….you must post tonight…..i totally cannot wait a few days for the update…….wondering what he wants……oh please..please…please….
I love this story… can’t wait for your up date… lets hope this is it for gracy…we need more..
BETTE & TINA LOVING IS ALWAYS GOOD…GREAT CHAPTER SO HAPPY YOU POSTED BETTE FORGETS EVEN THOUGH I LOVE ALSO
Great chapter. Bette and Tina are so in love and they can’t stop doing it. What’s Gracy want, is he want to say goodbye to her and tell her to take care and take care of his child. Post soon, thank you!
Wow this bette/gracey thing is weird, how could they have this bond as strong as they do?? Keep going
hey that was nice. I really like this Bette she is still the cute one. thanksie!!!
SORRY,GOT OUT OF CONTROL. I ALOS LOVE A DIFFERENT BEGINNING..PLEASE POST BEFORE YOU GO ON VACATION..
Geez, I wish my showers are that exciting!!…LOVED IT!!…So SEXY IN LOVE!!…Wonder what Gracy wants?…Hacome Bette didn’t want Tina to go with her to see Gracy?…I guess I’ll just have to wait and see=D…more NC-17, you so rock with these scenes!!
This is a great story :)
How come Bette didn’t want Tina there – she must suspect what is going to happen isn’t going to make Tina happy. Good chapter.
Okay so where is your crystal ball.
Are you a bona fide fortune teller?
This story has Bette with child and guess what, joyfully so is Jennifer Beals abet in much happier circumstances. Spooky!
As for this chapter, Awww sweet. I adore the way Tina and Bette interact and prove their love for one another.
Personally I feel that Bette want to showw herself that she can deal with Gracy on her own and not force Tina to witness this. Bette knows how difficult this has been for Tina and just want to protect her love.
Can’t wait for your next post. All your ways are wonderful and I always enjoy reading them.
Thank you.
A fan.
that was a great update post soon please:-)
I should be in bed but your story caught my eye. Another great one! I loved it and this is my favorite as you well know. I have a question though, where have I heard that word, that particular word, thanksie before????
I absolutely positively love your writing. You write so well, I feel like I’m watching tv instead of reading from a computer screen. I am currently following all three of your stories and check daily for updates. I was estatically surprised to see an update to ‘Bette Forgets’ since it is my favorite of the three. Can’t wait for more updates on whichever one you decide to update next. Great job!
OMG! I just looooovveee this story!!! Bette is so cute sometimes, I can see why they are all over each other so much…Hope the thing with Gracy isn’t going to be bad. It would be hard to watch Bette get hurt again. Thank you for this great story!
I love reading this story. I really feel as if I can see your characters and it feels as though your writing and mastery of imagery has keeps improving with each chapter. In my mind, I see Bette at 22. Even though I know she’s her real age, you write her with such childl-like (young adult like) enthusiasm that it really comes across that her mindset is back at age 22. I find it cute that she and Ben have forged a friendship despite this hell my beloved lady b had to endure. In my humble opinion you’ve come a mighty long way from the early chapters. And the sex scenes are great. Your usage of imagery makes the scenes really easy to read and get wrapped up in. HOTT. Thanks for that ;)I love your reading and I think you know that. Can’t wait to find out what Gracy wants.
Another amazing update on one of your many stories. Can´t wait to see what Cracy wan´t to say to Bette. Post soon and don´t leave us hanging here to long.