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Bette Forgets 17
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Hey Ben this is Tina, I say into the receiver
Wheres B?
Whatever you said to her got her very excited and she was twirling around the room.
Morning sickness is back is it?
With a vengeance apparently.
I could hear the sound of retching and then water running. Bette came out of the bathroom wiping her mouth with a cloth. I handed the phone back to her.
Hey Ben, Im back, Bette says a little more sedately
I dont hear what he says but I see Bette smile.
Yes twirling is out. Ill see you around noon…no thats okay…yeah thanks. Later.
She hangs up the phone and puts it back on the cradle.
Where are you going at noon, I ask Bette as she sits on the bed with a sigh
I actually needed to talk with you about that, Bette says sounding nervous which made me nervous
With a smile I say, What is it Bette? You know you can tell me anything.
She gives me a small smile, Im going to go and see Gracy today and I dont want you to come with me.
She got this all out in one big rush and it took another moment for it all to register in my head.
You are going to see Gracy, I say, And you dont want me to come with you.
No.
Why are you going to see Gracy? Isnt he in prison?
He asked to see me and yes he is in prison, Bette says standing to stand in front of me, I need to do this T. If for closure.
I thought the trial was closure.
It was for me and the other two evil men but not with Gracy. This is it T. The absolutely last time his name is ever mentioned, well intentionally anyway cause you never know when Alice will decide to…
I understand Bette and its okay.
She stops mid ramble with her mouth hanging open and its really very cute.
You do?
Ive come to understand the…thing between the two of you.
This is true enough because I understand that even though he attacked her he also saved her life and helped put away the true monsters in this drama. For that Bette feels a kind of empathy for him.
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I feel as if some ominous music should be playing. Nice little bits of lots of things in this one.
Loved it nothing more left to say.
WOW!!! That was NICE! lol…. I did guess the bedroom but not the Chair in the bedroom! hahaha.. but so think about the kitchen counter thing we talked about!..GREAT JOB!!!
I was scared to finish reading the story cause I knew how it going to end. Not knowing what Gracy wanted. So hurry with next chapter. Good Job.
Vulnerable, recently hurt, traumatized Bette alone again with Gracy — in a “maximum security prison.” This doesn’t feel right. Let’s hope Tina’s love and Ben’s support will add to her strength. Please post soon. Can’t wait for the update.
I just caught up with your story. Bette at 22 sure is different than Bette at 40. Though just as sexy, evidently. :) Keep the chapters coming, please.
I love this story. The sex just adds to the amazingness. I believe I’ll be needing a cold shower (alone sadly haha) Please continue!
alrighty….you must post tonight…..i totally cannot wait a few days for the update…….wondering what he wants……oh please..please…please….
I love this story… can’t wait for your up date… lets hope this is it for gracy…we need more..
BETTE & TINA LOVING IS ALWAYS GOOD…GREAT CHAPTER SO HAPPY YOU POSTED BETTE FORGETS EVEN THOUGH I LOVE ALSO
Great chapter. Bette and Tina are so in love and they can’t stop doing it. What’s Gracy want, is he want to say goodbye to her and tell her to take care and take care of his child. Post soon, thank you!
Wow this bette/gracey thing is weird, how could they have this bond as strong as they do?? Keep going
hey that was nice. I really like this Bette she is still the cute one. thanksie!!!
SORRY,GOT OUT OF CONTROL. I ALOS LOVE A DIFFERENT BEGINNING..PLEASE POST BEFORE YOU GO ON VACATION..
Geez, I wish my showers are that exciting!!…LOVED IT!!…So SEXY IN LOVE!!…Wonder what Gracy wants?…Hacome Bette didn’t want Tina to go with her to see Gracy?…I guess I’ll just have to wait and see=D…more NC-17, you so rock with these scenes!!
This is a great story :)
How come Bette didn’t want Tina there – she must suspect what is going to happen isn’t going to make Tina happy. Good chapter.
Okay so where is your crystal ball.
Are you a bona fide fortune teller?
This story has Bette with child and guess what, joyfully so is Jennifer Beals abet in much happier circumstances. Spooky!
As for this chapter, Awww sweet. I adore the way Tina and Bette interact and prove their love for one another.
Personally I feel that Bette want to showw herself that she can deal with Gracy on her own and not force Tina to witness this. Bette knows how difficult this has been for Tina and just want to protect her love.
Can’t wait for your next post. All your ways are wonderful and I always enjoy reading them.
Thank you.
A fan.
that was a great update post soon please:-)
I should be in bed but your story caught my eye. Another great one! I loved it and this is my favorite as you well know. I have a question though, where have I heard that word, that particular word, thanksie before????
I absolutely positively love your writing. You write so well, I feel like I’m watching tv instead of reading from a computer screen. I am currently following all three of your stories and check daily for updates. I was estatically surprised to see an update to ‘Bette Forgets’ since it is my favorite of the three. Can’t wait for more updates on whichever one you decide to update next. Great job!
OMG! I just looooovveee this story!!! Bette is so cute sometimes, I can see why they are all over each other so much…Hope the thing with Gracy isn’t going to be bad. It would be hard to watch Bette get hurt again. Thank you for this great story!
I love reading this story. I really feel as if I can see your characters and it feels as though your writing and mastery of imagery has keeps improving with each chapter. In my mind, I see Bette at 22. Even though I know she’s her real age, you write her with such childl-like (young adult like) enthusiasm that it really comes across that her mindset is back at age 22. I find it cute that she and Ben have forged a friendship despite this hell my beloved lady b had to endure. In my humble opinion you’ve come a mighty long way from the early chapters. And the sex scenes are great. Your usage of imagery makes the scenes really easy to read and get wrapped up in. HOTT. Thanks for that ;)I love your reading and I think you know that. Can’t wait to find out what Gracy wants.
Another amazing update on one of your many stories. Can´t wait to see what Cracy wan´t to say to Bette. Post soon and don´t leave us hanging here to long.