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Bette Forgets 34
Maureen nods her head, Yes. We cant change over night though. You know that right.
Bette smiles, I didnt expect you to. Changes like this take time. This is time that we have. My suggestion is that you…give an olive branch to Tina.
An olive branch, I ask
Peace offering. Dont you want to see her?
More than anything, Maureen sighs
Then come to LA.
*Bette*
After I ask them to come to LA they both just stare at me. I know that I need to do something but I done know what. I inwardly flinch as the twins have taken up their soccer practice once again with my bladder. Ooh. Idea.
Can I have your hand Mrs. Kennard, I ask looking over to her
My hand, she asks lifting it up
Trust me.
She nods her head even though she has no idea what I want her hand for. I gently take her hand and put it on the side of my stomach.
What are you, she starts to ask but stops when she feels a kick
A bright smile appears on her face.
Thats quite something, she says
Let me have you other hand.
She freely gives over her other hand this time and I place it on the other of my stomach and she feels two kicks simultaneously.
Now isnt that even better then the one, I ask with a smile, Well not for me perhaps…but Im sure it is wonderful for you.
I look over at Laurence Kennard and see him looking to his wife and then to me curiously. I beckon him over and he slowly comes and kneels next to his wife. He hesitantly puts his hands next to his wifes. I see his smile when he feels the babies kick.
I dont want you to miss this, I say putting my hands over top theirs, I want you to see how wonderful a mother that Tina is going to be. I want you to love Tina, cherish her…as I do.
They both look up at me with tears in their eyes.
These are your grandchildren, whether by blood or not. They are still your grandchildren.
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(36 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
yes please tell us..what it is..great chapter
Wow that was so good. Bette is fearless not even selfrighteous parents can stand in her way. Thanks
Just when your start getting more into the writing, the end draws near…..This story is so addictive and the drama is unreal. Wonderful writing…Bette’s words are extremely powerful in regards to forgiveness. BRAVO for you and being that wise woman exuding through one Ms. Bette Porter.
Holly shit, I have to tell you after reading the last 2 chapter, your writing abillty has grown so much, you can deliver these powerful stories that just are so heartfelt. Was that dana telling her favor comment for me, or maybe I’m just hoping it was for me, but either way I kinda want to know so I will try to be good, but theres no promise
Holey moley! That was awesome. Just the right amount of angst mixed with hope.
Absolutely beautiful! Please, please tell us what Dana owes Bette!
Reba,
Totally agree with all the comments. You have completely pulled these last two chapters outta of the bage and stunned all your fan.
Bloddy brilliant.
The way in which you have conveyed Tina’s parents is masterful.
More please, real soon.
A Loyal fan.
Reba… come on tell us…we are all good girls…cough cough… love this i love how bette got tina’s parents to agree…ok please we need you to continue…
I just caught up again. You are doing a fantastic job. I wonder why Dana owes Bette…
Yes please tell. Great chapter, please post soon
I like the way you have structured thsi story – flashbacks, first person PoV etc. It’s also fun to see this alternate Bette. MUCH more relaxed that TV control freak Bette (much as we love her!!)
Great chapter.. sorry i’m late reading. been busy.
This was an amazing chapter. I do not comment much but I had to for this one. Keep up the great work.
Hmmmmmmmmm…..what constitutes being bad?? Thanks for another great chapter. Bette is so calm and loving now. This is a nice side of her.
K
That was perfect. I just love your Bette. Wonderful chapter!
Karli’s stories make me a happy girl. :)
Great chapter. Bette did a wonderful job about Tina’s parents. Ok please post soon, thanks!