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    Bette Forgets 34

    Story written on June 14, 2005 by rebakathy.
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    Mystery Thursday Revealed
    Part 2: The Parents

    The two elder Kennards look to each other and a silent agreement passes between them.

    Well come to Los Angeles.

    I smile brightly as the remove their hands from my stomach, if reluctantly and look at me.

    Its not possible for us to get away now though, says Mr. Kennard, Probably not to next week.

    I nod my head, I understand.

    But well be there, says Maureen

    I smile, Thank you Mrs…

    Maureen, she interrupts, Please call me Maureen.

    Call me Laurence.

    I smile again and nod my head, Thank you Maureen and Laurence.

    Will you tell Christina about this visit?

    I shake my head, I think this should be a surprise. Dont you?

    They smile and nod their heads.

    I should really be going, I state attempting to rise to my feet

    Maureen and Laurence stand up and pull me to my feet. I smile at this.

    You should see the muscles Tina has gotten from doing just that.

    They laugh.

    Who are those girls in the car, Laurence asks, We could have invited them in.

    They knew that I needed to do this alone. My friend Dana and my doctor who is also a good friend Stacy.

    Handy to have a friend who is a doctor.

    I smile and nod, She started out as my doctor. I was first brought to her after the attack. Weve become great friends.

    They smile at me.

    They are probably driving each other mad by now. I really should be going.

    They walk with me toward the door opening it. When Dana sees the door open I see her literally jump out of the car and head toward me.

    Hey B, are you okay, Dana asks upon reaching me

    Never better. Dana these are Tinas parents Maureen and Laurence Kennard.

    Dana smiles, Its an honor to meet you, she says, You did a wonderful job raising Tina. She is certainly something.

    I see the parents straighten with pride.

    Theyre coming, I say

    Danas eyes widened, What?

    Not them, I say touching my stomach, Them, I point to Maureen and Laurence

    Oh, thats great.

    I take a pad of paper out of my bag and write down my cell phone number, This is my cell phone number, I say handing it to Laurence, Call me before you come.

    We will do that. Thank you Bette.

    Thank you.

    They tentatively give me a hug. Or as much as they can and then go into the house closing the door behind them.

    What was Stacy doing to you, I ask Dana as she guides me to the car

    Trying to get me to reveal what it was that I owe you for.

    I chuckle at this, You didnt cave did you?

    Dana glances sidelong at me, I didnt cave.

    Thats good. We can let it drive her nuts a little longer.

    Dana smiles, You want to tell her though, dont you?

    Is it okay?

    Its okay.

    Dana helps me into the car and we are on our way home. I lean back and close my eyes marveling at the healing power of children.

    Tbc…If you are really good I shall tell you what it was that Dana owes Bette so much.

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    3. Just when your start getting more into the writing, the end draws near…..This story is so addictive and the drama is unreal. Wonderful writing…Bette’s words are extremely powerful in regards to forgiveness. BRAVO for you and being that wise woman exuding through one Ms. Bette Porter.

    4. Holly shit, I have to tell you after reading the last 2 chapter, your writing abillty has grown so much, you can deliver these powerful stories that just are so heartfelt. Was that dana telling her favor comment for me, or maybe I’m just hoping it was for me, but either way I kinda want to know so I will try to be good, but theres no promise

    7. Reba,
      Totally agree with all the comments. You have completely pulled these last two chapters outta of the bage and stunned all your fan.
      Bloddy brilliant.
      The way in which you have conveyed Tina’s parents is masterful.
      More please, real soon.
      A Loyal fan.

    8. Reba… come on tell us…we are all good girls…cough cough… love this i love how bette got tina’s parents to agree…ok please we need you to continue…

    11. I like the way you have structured thsi story – flashbacks, first person PoV etc. It’s also fun to see this alternate Bette. MUCH more relaxed that TV control freak Bette (much as we love her!!)

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