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    Bette Forgets 34

    Story written on June 14, 2005 by rebakathy.
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    Mystery Thursday Revealed
    Part 2: The Parents

    *Stacy*

    We drive for what seems like forever but it is only an hour or so. We had to stop several times to let Bette move her legs. She has been very quiet ever since we left the prison. Very quiet. Gracys death affected her in a way I dont think that she truly expected. It affected me in a way I didnt expect.

    I have been angry with that man and his cohorts in crime for a very long time. Especially since one of them tried to get me to end my own life. I had prepared myself to be angry at them all from here to eternity. I had told myself that. They all deserved whatever they got. I never understood why Bette forgave this man. I could never see. When I saw the two of them, there in that room I understood a little more.

    Bette needed to forgive in order to move on with her life, she needed that. If she can forgive I can find some way, some how to forgive something a hundred times more brutal then what happened to me, then I can forgive. Surely I can forgive.

    Youve done it, I hear Bette say

    I turn my eyes to her and realize that she has been watching me intently.

    Done what?

    Forgiven.

    I smile at this, Yeah.

    Were here, Dana states pulling up to a rather large and beautiful home

    Bette turns away from me with a smile, I need to go in alone.

    But… I start

    This is something that I need to do, Bette says in a tone that brokers no argument

    Well be here Bette, says Dana taking Bettes hand and squeezing her hand

    Bette smiles at us both and then taking a deep breath opens the door and gets out.

    *Laurence Kennard*

    Im reading a book when the doorbell rings. We arent expecting anyone. Shrugging my shoulders I get to my feet and go to the door. Upon opening it I see a very pregnant stranger standing on the doorstep.

    Can I help you with something, I ask her with a smile

    I see the woman take in a deep breath, I hope so.

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    3. Just when your start getting more into the writing, the end draws near…..This story is so addictive and the drama is unreal. Wonderful writing…Bette’s words are extremely powerful in regards to forgiveness. BRAVO for you and being that wise woman exuding through one Ms. Bette Porter.

    4. Holly shit, I have to tell you after reading the last 2 chapter, your writing abillty has grown so much, you can deliver these powerful stories that just are so heartfelt. Was that dana telling her favor comment for me, or maybe I’m just hoping it was for me, but either way I kinda want to know so I will try to be good, but theres no promise

    7. Reba,
      Totally agree with all the comments. You have completely pulled these last two chapters outta of the bage and stunned all your fan.
      Bloddy brilliant.
      The way in which you have conveyed Tina’s parents is masterful.
      More please, real soon.
      A Loyal fan.

    8. Reba… come on tell us…we are all good girls…cough cough… love this i love how bette got tina’s parents to agree…ok please we need you to continue…

    11. I like the way you have structured thsi story – flashbacks, first person PoV etc. It’s also fun to see this alternate Bette. MUCH more relaxed that TV control freak Bette (much as we love her!!)

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