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    Bette Forgets 59

    Story written on August 25, 2005 by rebakathy.
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    Be invisible and you shall find the truth.

     

    “Carmen.  What are you doing here?”

     

    “I wanted to make sure you were okay.”

     

    She smiles slightly at this, “I’m as well as can be expected.  Do you want to come in?”

     

    I nod my head at this and am ushered into the house.  I follow her into the living room where we’ve shared so many good laughs and great moments.  Wait?  What is this guilt?  Do not feel guilty.  Buck up.

     

    I take a seat on a chair while Bette sits back in the deep cushions of the couch and gazes at me.

     

    “I think you’d be going crazy about now,” I say to Bette

     

    “I trust the police to do their thing,” Bette remarks placidly, “They will find Tina.”

     

    “I hope so,” I state trying to sound like I mean it

     

    Bette smiles ever so softly at me, “Thank you.”

     

    I stood up abruptly and Bette just raises an eyebrow at this, “I should be going.  I don’t want to take up anymore of your time.”

     

    Bette stands up and walks closer to me.  For a second I’m fearful of what she’s going to do but she pulls me into a tight hug.

     

    “Thank you for being my friend,” she whispers in my ear, “I don’t know what I would do without my friends.”

     

    She pulls away from me.

     

    “I’m uhgoing to go say goodbye to Shane and then am going to head home.”

     

    “Sounds like a good plan.”

     

    The doorbell rings just then.  Bette walks me to the door where Maureen Kennard is standing.  I smile at her and walk out of the house looking back as Maureen and Bette embrace tightly.

     

     

    Bette

     

    I feel a sense of relief hit me knowing that Maureen is watching the boys right now.  I should really be there with them but I needed to get out.  I needed to take care of something, once and for all.  With a sigh I sit up in the bed of the truck that belongs to Carmen.  I had hid in it when she went to go say goodbye to Shane. 

     

    I suspected that it was Carmen, but facing the reality of it was something else altogether.  I realized it was her, truly her when she came to visit me today.  The look in her eyes when I opened the door was something I couldn’t quite decipher.  It was also the timing of her visit.  She came not five minutes after Shane left. 

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    1. why the shitload of bad stuff on the gang? dint bette gone through the worst every period of her life and now this? is this the new way of living – tormenting ppl by kidnapping them and doing hurtful things? golly i really felt sad that carmen had to go through such torment – sigh what love does to one ?

    2. No severe traumas here!

      I’m just, you know, surprised at Bette’s forgiving nature. It makes her so much stronger than the ‘regular-Type-A-personality Bette’.

      She’s amazing. Great work!

    3. OMG..soo much for Bette to handle, especially, with what happened to her in that place. Now Carmen’s dead…hope Bette can get through that. The fact that Bette is very upset about Carmen’s death indicates she’s going to have a hard time of it. Damn…like she & Tina haven’t suffered enough. Let’s hope Shane doesn’t blame Bette…they have a cool relationship. Thanks for this chapter…please continue.

    5. “Some of you are probably thinking that something is gonna happen between Shane and Bette. You can put the rocks and other items away, nothing will happen”………now this was funny! (as I place my rock in my pocket) ;-)

      Now that I am finished reading this chapter, all I can say is damn! Doesnt B&T go through enough already? I almost feel sorry for them because there is always something lurking aroung the corner.

    6. OMG you killed kenny!!! wait it’s carmen sorry about that.
      FUCKING BRILLANT!!!
      damm poor shane what drama are you going to bring for her? and will her and bette still be friends?? or will the death of carmen bring them closer together?. Stay tune as we will see what reabakathy has in store for the next installments of as bette forgets

    10. Damnnn this is fucking awesome, I can’t believe is Carmen I thought is Jenny but not, anyway this is to much for Bette to handle and so much pain for her, and she forgive Carmen, damn she is an amazing person. Oh poor Shane and hope she will get throught this sad news. Ok please post soon, thanks!

    11. RK,

      Nicely done. You have really managed to clean house so to speak.

      Carmen is outta the picture and now is a time to appreciate hat you have and tell them how much they mean to you.

      There needs to be some convalescence. I am sure that Bette and Tina both have Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome after this latest horror.

      I love the way you make these characters strong and forgiving, Not sure if I would react that way.

      Please continue this fantastic and fabulous fan fiction.
      Your Loyal Fan.

    12. You know it took me a little while to see carmen as the… bad bad girl that she is… but I think it turned out really well for the story…. it’s just sad you had to kill her, she was hot… and a very very bad girl… hehe great story ;)

    13. Completely and totally AWESOME!!!! I agree that it made Bette a much better person to be able to forgive Carmen.

      I really have always loved this story from it’s very first chapter. I look forward to much happiness for the gang now.

    14. Just been doing some catching up on your wonderful story here Reba……OMG the drama and Carmen being the bad girl here…I never saw it comming. Amazing story here Raba..can´t wait until the next post…please not Bette and Shane together….Nightmare.

    15. Poor Bette so much drama. Bette life seem to be full of all sorts of totment to live or try to live a nomal life. Bette and Tina both are pretty amaing, thanks

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