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    Bette Forgets 59

    Story written on August 25, 2005 by rebakathy.
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    Be invisible and you shall find the truth.

     

    With a start I realize what the look had meant.  Jealousy.  Pure and simple jealousy.  Why didn’t I see it before now?  She’s always been jealous of the relationship that Shane and have and it isn’t even a relationship, not in the biblical sense that is.  Nothing would ever happen between us.  Sure, I’ve sometimes fantasized about that lean lanky body but who doesn’t have fantasies?

     

    I shake my head to get my thoughts back on track.  I pull myself out of the bed of Carmen’s truck and land softly on my feet.  I’m glad it’s dark and I decided to change into the ensemble right for this kind of thing, if there is an ensemble for this kind of thing.  I wish I wasn’t even doing this.  I have to though.  I look up at the old house looming before me.

     

    This place brings back memories and none of them are good.  This was the place where so much of my life was taken from me and I don’t know if I can handle going back in there.  No!  I have to.  Tina is in there.  This whole situation is kind of perverse in a crazy kind of way.  That’s what shows me that Carmen really has lost it.  Truly.  I thought I saw a bit of regret after I told her that I was glad for her friendship.  It took every ounce of strength not to reveal my hand and make her tell me where she’d taken Tina.

     

    No.

     

    This was better, much better.  Taking a deep breath I silently make my way up the walk and up the surprisingly sturdy steps for a condemned building.  It still looks rather condemned.  The boards are still across the door but this close you can tell those are just for show, that you can open the door without any problem.  I put my ear to the door and listen.  Nothing.  I push open the door to find darkness awaiting me.  I expect Carmen to jump out at me but she doesn’t know that I’m here.  That’s how I’d like to keep it for now.  Once inside the house I quietly close the door and crouch down low to the floor and close my eyes.

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    1. why the shitload of bad stuff on the gang? dint bette gone through the worst every period of her life and now this? is this the new way of living – tormenting ppl by kidnapping them and doing hurtful things? golly i really felt sad that carmen had to go through such torment – sigh what love does to one ?

    2. No severe traumas here!

      I’m just, you know, surprised at Bette’s forgiving nature. It makes her so much stronger than the ‘regular-Type-A-personality Bette’.

      She’s amazing. Great work!

    3. OMG..soo much for Bette to handle, especially, with what happened to her in that place. Now Carmen’s dead…hope Bette can get through that. The fact that Bette is very upset about Carmen’s death indicates she’s going to have a hard time of it. Damn…like she & Tina haven’t suffered enough. Let’s hope Shane doesn’t blame Bette…they have a cool relationship. Thanks for this chapter…please continue.

    5. “Some of you are probably thinking that something is gonna happen between Shane and Bette. You can put the rocks and other items away, nothing will happen”………now this was funny! (as I place my rock in my pocket) ;-)

      Now that I am finished reading this chapter, all I can say is damn! Doesnt B&T go through enough already? I almost feel sorry for them because there is always something lurking aroung the corner.

    6. OMG you killed kenny!!! wait it’s carmen sorry about that.
      FUCKING BRILLANT!!!
      damm poor shane what drama are you going to bring for her? and will her and bette still be friends?? or will the death of carmen bring them closer together?. Stay tune as we will see what reabakathy has in store for the next installments of as bette forgets

    10. Damnnn this is fucking awesome, I can’t believe is Carmen I thought is Jenny but not, anyway this is to much for Bette to handle and so much pain for her, and she forgive Carmen, damn she is an amazing person. Oh poor Shane and hope she will get throught this sad news. Ok please post soon, thanks!

    11. RK,

      Nicely done. You have really managed to clean house so to speak.

      Carmen is outta the picture and now is a time to appreciate hat you have and tell them how much they mean to you.

      There needs to be some convalescence. I am sure that Bette and Tina both have Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome after this latest horror.

      I love the way you make these characters strong and forgiving, Not sure if I would react that way.

      Please continue this fantastic and fabulous fan fiction.
      Your Loyal Fan.

    12. You know it took me a little while to see carmen as the… bad bad girl that she is… but I think it turned out really well for the story…. it’s just sad you had to kill her, she was hot… and a very very bad girl… hehe great story ;)

    13. Completely and totally AWESOME!!!! I agree that it made Bette a much better person to be able to forgive Carmen.

      I really have always loved this story from it’s very first chapter. I look forward to much happiness for the gang now.

    14. Just been doing some catching up on your wonderful story here Reba……OMG the drama and Carmen being the bad girl here…I never saw it comming. Amazing story here Raba..can´t wait until the next post…please not Bette and Shane together….Nightmare.

    15. Poor Bette so much drama. Bette life seem to be full of all sorts of totment to live or try to live a nomal life. Bette and Tina both are pretty amaing, thanks

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