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During my captivity they kept me blinded a lot of the time and thus I had to learn to rely on my other senses. My hearing became quiet acute and this ability has not waned. I listen for a moment and hear voices in the background. Downstairs. Of course Carmen would keep Tina downstairs. Think of the most hideous place to keep the love all of my life and the place where I was raped and tortured would be the winner.
Standing up I make my way through the house and stop in my tracks at hearing the creaking of the stairs signaling someone was coming up the stairs. I back up back into the shadows of the living room and watch, waiting. As I watched Carmen step into the room my anger toward her escalated. She was acting like the act of keeping another human being prisoner was nothing. She didn’t see me and for this I was glad.
Should I wait till she leaves to grab Tina or confront Carmen here and now? Now!
“I applaud you,” I say softly from my place of darkness
Carmen whirls around with a shocked look on her face. I can tell that she can’t spot where I am.
“Whose here?”
“Who do you think Carmen?”
“How did you get here?”
“If you’re are going to be a crazy stalker you should make sure that no one is watching you. I figured out it was you Carmen.”
I moved from my spot keeping against the wall in my darkness. Carmen kept whirling around looking for me.
Carmen
Damn it why can’t I see her? How did she get here?
“I want to know why Carmen,” comes from seemingly all around me
“You know why,” I say deciding to stand in one spot
“I want to hear you say the words Carmen.”
“She loves you more than she loves me,” I exclaim, “More than she’ll ever love another human being!”
There is silence to this statement.
“Your silence proves that it’s true, that you know it to be true.”
“She may have feelings for me, yes, but I don’t think that it’s love Carmen.”
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why the shitload of bad stuff on the gang? dint bette gone through the worst every period of her life and now this? is this the new way of living – tormenting ppl by kidnapping them and doing hurtful things? golly i really felt sad that carmen had to go through such torment – sigh what love does to one ?
No severe traumas here!
I’m just, you know, surprised at Bette’s forgiving nature. It makes her so much stronger than the ‘regular-Type-A-personality Bette’.
She’s amazing. Great work!
OMG..soo much for Bette to handle, especially, with what happened to her in that place. Now Carmen’s dead…hope Bette can get through that. The fact that Bette is very upset about Carmen’s death indicates she’s going to have a hard time of it. Damn…like she & Tina haven’t suffered enough. Let’s hope Shane doesn’t blame Bette…they have a cool relationship. Thanks for this chapter…please continue.
damn rk that was great. not tramatized at all. poor bette and tina. cant see wait to see where you take us next. thanks.
“Some of you are probably thinking that something is gonna happen between Shane and Bette. You can put the rocks and other items away, nothing will happen”………now this was funny! (as I place my rock in my pocket) ;-)
Now that I am finished reading this chapter, all I can say is damn! Doesnt B&T go through enough already? I almost feel sorry for them because there is always something lurking aroung the corner.
OMG you killed kenny!!! wait it’s carmen sorry about that.
FUCKING BRILLANT!!!
damm poor shane what drama are you going to bring for her? and will her and bette still be friends?? or will the death of carmen bring them closer together?. Stay tune as we will see what reabakathy has in store for the next installments of as bette forgets
motherfuckingit!! am I the only one on this site that wants so hot bette and shane action???
Poor poor Bette how much can the one person take I don’t think our Bette will recover from this
Ooohhh the drama!! Excellent chapter (I couldn’t turn the “pages” fast enough!! Fantastic story–Looking foward to chapter 60!
Damnnn this is fucking awesome, I can’t believe is Carmen I thought is Jenny but not, anyway this is to much for Bette to handle and so much pain for her, and she forgive Carmen, damn she is an amazing person. Oh poor Shane and hope she will get throught this sad news. Ok please post soon, thanks!
RK,
Nicely done. You have really managed to clean house so to speak.
Carmen is outta the picture and now is a time to appreciate hat you have and tell them how much they mean to you.
There needs to be some convalescence. I am sure that Bette and Tina both have Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome after this latest horror.
I love the way you make these characters strong and forgiving, Not sure if I would react that way.
Please continue this fantastic and fabulous fan fiction.
Your Loyal Fan.
You know it took me a little while to see carmen as the… bad bad girl that she is… but I think it turned out really well for the story…. it’s just sad you had to kill her, she was hot… and a very very bad girl… hehe great story ;)
Completely and totally AWESOME!!!! I agree that it made Bette a much better person to be able to forgive Carmen.
I really have always loved this story from it’s very first chapter. I look forward to much happiness for the gang now.
Just been doing some catching up on your wonderful story here Reba……OMG the drama and Carmen being the bad girl here…I never saw it comming. Amazing story here Raba..can´t wait until the next post…please not Bette and Shane together….Nightmare.
Poor Bette so much drama. Bette life seem to be full of all sorts of totment to live or try to live a nomal life. Bette and Tina both are pretty amaing, thanks
WOW,ALL I CAN THINK ABOUT IS POOR SHANE…GREAT JOB GIRL..JUST BRILLIANT….NEXT CHAPTER 60 THANKS…
Reba…. Loved it… sorry for the way it ended for carmen , but she wasn’t going to just leave and so you did the only thing you could.. reading on