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Bette Forgets 59
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“It is,” I yell
Tina
I thought I had heard voice above me but I couldn’t be sure. It could be my delusional mind hearing things. When I hear Carmen yell I know that someone else is there. Who though?
Carmen
“Shane doesn’t trust easily Carmen,” Bette speaks from somewhere around me, “She doesn’t love easily. She loves you. We all know this.”
“I know she loves me,” I state indignantly
“But it’s not enough,” come back to me
“How would you feel if Tina were in love with someone else?”
Silence.
“I have nothing to compare that to because Tina isn’t in love with anyone else Carmen.”
I suck in a breath at this.
“This is why you decided to stalk me, because in your mind you think that Shane is in love with me?”
“It’s not all in my head,” I shout
“Whichever way it was you still made the choice to start stalking me.”
“I needed to find out why, why she found you so fascinating. Why so many people found you so damn irresistible!”
“Did you find what you were looking for,” comes the softly spoken question
“NO!”
“What did you find Carmen?”
Her saying my name like that is really starting to unnerve me.
“I fell in love with you damn it!”
“This angered you more?”
“What do you think? Where the ***** are you.”
“Here.”
I whirl around to see Bette standing before me holding a gun on me. Where did she get that?
“This is between you and me Carmen. Let Tina go.”
I look from the gun up to Bette’s face, “I can’t.”
“If you love Shane half as much as you say you do you will end this now, ***** if you love me you will end this now.”
Bette was bluffing. She would never shoot me, she didn’t have it in her. I step toward her and see her finger move to the trigger.
“Try me.”
I step back from her and her finger moves away.
“This has all gone on long enough Carmen. Don’t you think so? It needs to end now before someone gets hurt, if someone isn’t already hurt. You didn’t hurt her did you?”
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why the shitload of bad stuff on the gang? dint bette gone through the worst every period of her life and now this? is this the new way of living – tormenting ppl by kidnapping them and doing hurtful things? golly i really felt sad that carmen had to go through such torment – sigh what love does to one ?
No severe traumas here!
I’m just, you know, surprised at Bette’s forgiving nature. It makes her so much stronger than the ‘regular-Type-A-personality Bette’.
She’s amazing. Great work!
OMG..soo much for Bette to handle, especially, with what happened to her in that place. Now Carmen’s dead…hope Bette can get through that. The fact that Bette is very upset about Carmen’s death indicates she’s going to have a hard time of it. Damn…like she & Tina haven’t suffered enough. Let’s hope Shane doesn’t blame Bette…they have a cool relationship. Thanks for this chapter…please continue.
damn rk that was great. not tramatized at all. poor bette and tina. cant see wait to see where you take us next. thanks.
“Some of you are probably thinking that something is gonna happen between Shane and Bette. You can put the rocks and other items away, nothing will happen”………now this was funny! (as I place my rock in my pocket) ;-)
Now that I am finished reading this chapter, all I can say is damn! Doesnt B&T go through enough already? I almost feel sorry for them because there is always something lurking aroung the corner.
OMG you killed kenny!!! wait it’s carmen sorry about that.
FUCKING BRILLANT!!!
damm poor shane what drama are you going to bring for her? and will her and bette still be friends?? or will the death of carmen bring them closer together?. Stay tune as we will see what reabakathy has in store for the next installments of as bette forgets
motherfuckingit!! am I the only one on this site that wants so hot bette and shane action???
Poor poor Bette how much can the one person take I don’t think our Bette will recover from this
Ooohhh the drama!! Excellent chapter (I couldn’t turn the “pages” fast enough!! Fantastic story–Looking foward to chapter 60!
Damnnn this is fucking awesome, I can’t believe is Carmen I thought is Jenny but not, anyway this is to much for Bette to handle and so much pain for her, and she forgive Carmen, damn she is an amazing person. Oh poor Shane and hope she will get throught this sad news. Ok please post soon, thanks!
RK,
Nicely done. You have really managed to clean house so to speak.
Carmen is outta the picture and now is a time to appreciate hat you have and tell them how much they mean to you.
There needs to be some convalescence. I am sure that Bette and Tina both have Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome after this latest horror.
I love the way you make these characters strong and forgiving, Not sure if I would react that way.
Please continue this fantastic and fabulous fan fiction.
Your Loyal Fan.
You know it took me a little while to see carmen as the… bad bad girl that she is… but I think it turned out really well for the story…. it’s just sad you had to kill her, she was hot… and a very very bad girl… hehe great story ;)
Completely and totally AWESOME!!!! I agree that it made Bette a much better person to be able to forgive Carmen.
I really have always loved this story from it’s very first chapter. I look forward to much happiness for the gang now.
Just been doing some catching up on your wonderful story here Reba……OMG the drama and Carmen being the bad girl here…I never saw it comming. Amazing story here Raba..can´t wait until the next post…please not Bette and Shane together….Nightmare.
Poor Bette so much drama. Bette life seem to be full of all sorts of totment to live or try to live a nomal life. Bette and Tina both are pretty amaing, thanks
WOW,ALL I CAN THINK ABOUT IS POOR SHANE…GREAT JOB GIRL..JUST BRILLIANT….NEXT CHAPTER 60 THANKS…
Reba…. Loved it… sorry for the way it ended for carmen , but she wasn’t going to just leave and so you did the only thing you could.. reading on