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    Bette Forgets 9

    Story written on April 1, 2005 by rebakathy1.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=52957
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    Someone’s caught, someone cries and there are hugs all around.

    *Detective Benjamin Hallow*

    I sit here in my office trying to get some kind of quiet in my life. This doesnt happen much these days anymore. Not since we havent been able to catch the horrible men that did that horrible hate crime on one Ms. Bette Porter. No. I am the one in charge and thus the one that gets the most hassle, the most *****. Not that I dont think I dont deserve it, but its just hard sometimes is all. Weve tried so hard to catch these guys, its like theyve disappeared off the face of the map.

    Believe me when I say that no one would be hiding them at this particular point in time. The people around here would sooner see these guys tarred and feathered than to harbor them from us. I would personally like to see these men tarred and feathered in the town square but that wouldnt be very authoritative of me. I did just receive some happy news. I got a call from Stacey Winters who has been Ms. Porters Doctor; Bette is awake. I thank whoever is up there thatll listen to me for this.

    Frowning I look down at the folder that is open on my desk. We get hundreds of leads every day but none of them have turned out to mean much of anything. People think they see one of these guys and call us up, people think they saw the car the call us up. Closing the folder I sigh. This really sucks. Getting up I peak my head outside of my office. It looks like the cost is clear. Weve had people here almost nonstop asking us why we havent caught these guys, how could we be so incompetent? Those type of questions. I need to go and get some coffee.

    Today is my day off but like most days I find myself here, trying to solve this case. It has started to consume my life, as well it should. Seeing no one ready to pounce on me I leave the office and head to my car. Im in civilian clothes, since its my day off and get into my beat up car, personal car that is cause the police vehicles are amazing.

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    4. Nice. But Bette seems a little too calm, somehow. I think she’d be angry at the situation, the memory loss, and just a lot of things right now. (For what that’s worth.)

    8. Was it something I said? Just when I comment that you’re doing such a fine job with the two stories, one magically disappears. Ooh, you authors and your power trips! I’m looking forward to the ‘new and improved’ version.
      I’m laughing as I think of the police officers in my town, that Gracy would have been free and clear because none of them are former track stars still in shape! Hee hee. But you did a great job of setting the scene for the Detective, how he is affected professionally and personally by this case, and giving us a more full sense of his feelings when he apprehends Gracy. Nice that he could wind up with his colleagues as an audience.
      I also like how your story includes national and local outrage about this crime for what it is. Such a welcome vision in this time of intolerance and thinly-veiled gay-bashing by a wide variety of so-called leaders. So sad that it takes a tragedy for people to realize their compassion. I’ll continue to hope for something less dramatic but equally effective in real life, like all of us living our lives with dignity and grace and leading by example. Whoa, sorry to have gotten heavy there. But isn’t it nice to know the effect your writing can have?! Thanks so much.

    9. Great chapter. I’m glad the Detective caught 1 of those guys and now can’t wait to know what gonna happen next if they will find another guys too I hope they will. I’m happy to see all the girls see Tina and happy with them. Please post soon, thank you!

    10. Thanks for the update. So, this will be Bette & Tina’s baby. It’ll be interesting to see how Bette deal with the capture of her attackers and any potential trial. I really like the re-connection between B&T. Even though she can’t remember her, Bette still feels comforted & safe with Tina. nice touch.

    13. Wonderfull update. Still before the storm…..what does Bette have installed for us. Is she going to freak out or somthing. Or maybe show us the Porter charm. Post soon

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