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Bette Forgets 9
Lookie who I found, I comment to my partner Teyla Markis
Teyla smiles at me as she recognizes the man I have in my hands, Well Ill be damned you found Tom Gracy.
Those around recognize the name from the news and turn to him. I can tell by the looks in their eyes that Id better get this ***** out of there before someone killed him or something.
This day is really looking up.
*Tina*
Im pregnant.
This is what Bette said to me a few minutes ago and I have as yet to say anything to this. She is looking at me with a look I cant quite decipher at the moment. Somewhere between fear, happiness, sadness and…hope?
Tina?
Yes.
She raises her eyebrows at me waiting for my answer. I thought I did? Maybe that was all in my head.
Yes?
Say something.
Like what?
Bette shrugs at this, Anything.
I scratch the side of my neck, How do you feel about this?
She frowns at that, Well Ive always wanted to have children. I just didnt think it would be like this, she says looking down at her hands
God Im such an idiot. Getting up from the chair I sit on the side of the bed and pull her into my arms, Im sorry that its like this Bette.
She holds on to my arms as she starts to cry, Ssh its okay.
Once the tears have stopped she doesnt let go of me and I dont let go of her.
Um Tina, Bette asks sniffling
Yeah?
Can this be our baby? Not one of the guys that did this to me but yours and mine? I mean I dont really remember you or anything but I know that I want to be with you. Can this be our little boy or girl?
Tears well up in my eyes as Bette asks me this question, I would love that Baby. Absolutely love that.
Bette is about to say something when the door bursts open and Doctor Winters runs in, They caught one!
What, both Bette and I ask in unison
Sorry for scaring you but they caught one of the guys that attacked you!
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(50 votes, average: 3.50 out of 5)
Great update!! Good thing they caught one of the guy’s.
I so love this story…….. :)))
wonderful update.
Nice. But Bette seems a little too calm, somehow. I think she’d be angry at the situation, the memory loss, and just a lot of things right now. (For what that’s worth.)
Tis the calm before the storm my friend. *Hint hint wink wink*
I love your stories so much. This one was so great and I hope you will continue it. You have my curiosity with the storm comment. :-)
This is a great story. Please don’t make it to stormy.
Was it something I said? Just when I comment that you’re doing such a fine job with the two stories, one magically disappears. Ooh, you authors and your power trips! I’m looking forward to the ‘new and improved’ version.
I’m laughing as I think of the police officers in my town, that Gracy would have been free and clear because none of them are former track stars still in shape! Hee hee. But you did a great job of setting the scene for the Detective, how he is affected professionally and personally by this case, and giving us a more full sense of his feelings when he apprehends Gracy. Nice that he could wind up with his colleagues as an audience.
I also like how your story includes national and local outrage about this crime for what it is. Such a welcome vision in this time of intolerance and thinly-veiled gay-bashing by a wide variety of so-called leaders. So sad that it takes a tragedy for people to realize their compassion. I’ll continue to hope for something less dramatic but equally effective in real life, like all of us living our lives with dignity and grace and leading by example. Whoa, sorry to have gotten heavy there. But isn’t it nice to know the effect your writing can have?! Thanks so much.
Great chapter. I’m glad the Detective caught 1 of those guys and now can’t wait to know what gonna happen next if they will find another guys too I hope they will. I’m happy to see all the girls see Tina and happy with them. Please post soon, thank you!
Thanks for the update. So, this will be Bette & Tina’s baby. It’ll be interesting to see how Bette deal with the capture of her attackers and any potential trial. I really like the re-connection between B&T. Even though she can’t remember her, Bette still feels comforted & safe with Tina. nice touch.
LOVING THE STORY POST SOON…………….
Thanks for the chapter. Just caught up with the previous three chapters. Will read your next post ;)
Wonderfull update. Still before the storm…..what does Bette have installed for us. Is she going to freak out or somthing. Or maybe show us the Porter charm. Post soon