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Bette Forgets 9
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Heading toward the little coffee shop I look around at the people that I pass on my way there. My eyes goes to a man wearing a baseball cap pulled over his eyes and is in black. Weird for ninety degree weather. Damn that man looks familiar. With the subtly of a two by four to the temple I realize who that is. Tom Gracy. One of the men that attacked Ms. Porter. Slamming on my breaks not caring about the cars behind me I jump out of my car and take off running toward the man.
Seeing me running after him this man isnt sure whats going on.
Police, I shout, Stay where you are and no one will get hurt!
Of course I know this isnt going to work and he takes off running down the street. I grin at this. I take off running after him.
Mr. Gracy, I am yelling as I run, You are I think, one of the dumbest criminals known to man. You shouldnt have come back here!
He thinks that he can get away from me because I am middle aged and have been a cop for ages. Little does he know that I was a college track star and still love to run. As I get closer this gets more real. If Gracy is here where the ***** are his two buddies? They cant really be around here as well? With a flying tackle any football couch would have been proud of, I knock this guy to the ground.
I told you to stay where you were, I commented grabbing his hands to cuff them as I straddled this guys legs, You have the right to remain silent, anything you say or do can be used against you the court of law, you have the right to an attorney if you cannot afford an attorney one will be appointed you. Do you understand these rights as I have given them to you?
Ive never been so happy to give that in all my life. Pulling the man to his feet I take off the cap and smile. It is him. By now people have started to congregate around us. Seeing as how I tackled this guy in front of the little coffee shop that most of the cops congregate some come out to see whats going on.
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Great update!! Good thing they caught one of the guy’s.
I so love this story…….. :)))
wonderful update.
Nice. But Bette seems a little too calm, somehow. I think she’d be angry at the situation, the memory loss, and just a lot of things right now. (For what that’s worth.)
Tis the calm before the storm my friend. *Hint hint wink wink*
I love your stories so much. This one was so great and I hope you will continue it. You have my curiosity with the storm comment. :-)
This is a great story. Please don’t make it to stormy.
Was it something I said? Just when I comment that you’re doing such a fine job with the two stories, one magically disappears. Ooh, you authors and your power trips! I’m looking forward to the ‘new and improved’ version.
I’m laughing as I think of the police officers in my town, that Gracy would have been free and clear because none of them are former track stars still in shape! Hee hee. But you did a great job of setting the scene for the Detective, how he is affected professionally and personally by this case, and giving us a more full sense of his feelings when he apprehends Gracy. Nice that he could wind up with his colleagues as an audience.
I also like how your story includes national and local outrage about this crime for what it is. Such a welcome vision in this time of intolerance and thinly-veiled gay-bashing by a wide variety of so-called leaders. So sad that it takes a tragedy for people to realize their compassion. I’ll continue to hope for something less dramatic but equally effective in real life, like all of us living our lives with dignity and grace and leading by example. Whoa, sorry to have gotten heavy there. But isn’t it nice to know the effect your writing can have?! Thanks so much.
Great chapter. I’m glad the Detective caught 1 of those guys and now can’t wait to know what gonna happen next if they will find another guys too I hope they will. I’m happy to see all the girls see Tina and happy with them. Please post soon, thank you!
Thanks for the update. So, this will be Bette & Tina’s baby. It’ll be interesting to see how Bette deal with the capture of her attackers and any potential trial. I really like the re-connection between B&T. Even though she can’t remember her, Bette still feels comforted & safe with Tina. nice touch.
LOVING THE STORY POST SOON…………….
Thanks for the chapter. Just caught up with the previous three chapters. Will read your next post ;)
Wonderfull update. Still before the storm…..what does Bette have installed for us. Is she going to freak out or somthing. Or maybe show us the Porter charm. Post soon