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    Bette Forgets 9

    Story written on April 1, 2005 by rebakathy1.
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    Someone’s caught, someone cries and there are hugs all around.

    Well thats…incredible.

    Are you serious, Bette asks

    Tom Gracy. Hes one of the guys that did this to you yes.

    Howd they catch him, I ask

    Winters sits down on the stool that I had vacated, The lead detective had been going to get some coffee when he thought he spotted someone familiar walking down the street. It was Gracy.

    He was here, Bette asks, Thats stupid.

    Yes it is. Detective Hallow just called me to tell me that they caught him. Im so happy for that man.

    Who Gracy, I ask

    Detective Hallow, Winters responds, Hes taken so much ***** over these last months for not being able to catch these guys.

    Its not his fault that they had no good leads or anything, Bette comments with a nod

    Yeah well when people are angry and out for blood they arent thinking that rationally.

    So what happens now?

    Hallow and the other police grill this guy until he gives up the other two.

    I like that idea, I remark

    Me too, says Bette

    I walked in on something didnt I, Winters asks

    I actually just told Tina about the baby, says Bette

    Winters smiles, Good. Ill leave you two alone now.

    Thanks for the good news Doc, Bette says to her

    Any time.

    Winters leaves the room closing the door behind her. Im about to get up to sit in the chair when Bette stops me.

    Can we just stay like this for a little bit?

    Sure.

    I hold on to her tightly and we remain like this for a few minutes or maybe it was an hour but then the quiet solitude is interrupted when the door bursts open.

    *Alice*

    We just heard on the news that one of the guys that attacked Bette has been caught and is being questioned by the police. This is amazing news. Its more than amazing. Whats better than amazing?

    ***** fantastic, I mumble under my breath

    What was that, Dana asks from the passenger seat

    Nothing, I answer turning my attention to the road

    I, Dana, Shane and Jenny are on our way to the hospital. Kit is going to meet us there.

    Do you think that Bette knows that the police have caught one of the guys that attacked her, Jenny asks from the back seat

    I dont know, I remarked as I focused on my driving, But I guess well find out.

    *Kit*

    How the heck did I beat the girls to the hospital? Alice drives like a bat out of ***** most days but especially when she has somewhere important to be. I shrug my shoulders at this question and head up to my baby sisters room and stop dead in my tracks at what I see.

    Tina.

    Tina and Bette.

    Together.

    I think I had heat stroke and am imagining things. Yeah that has to be it because Tina cant really be here. Can she?

    Tina, I hear myself ask

    She turns to me and smiles. Okay so maybe she is really here. Before I can contemplate this further the girls run up behind me and they stop in their tracks as they see Tina.

    Tina!

    Pushing passed me Alice pounces on Tina hugging her tightly as the rest follow suit.

    I guess you guys missed Tina huh, I hear Bette ask

    Were thrilled to see Tina, states Jenny

    Bette just looks at Jenny and then to one of us for help. Since everyone is busy hugging Tina I respond.

    Thats Jenny, I comment coming over and standing beside my sister, How are you doing?

    Surprisingly well.

    Thats wonderful baby sis.

    She smiles at me as the others pull away from Tina I hug her tightly.

    Good to have you back baby girl. You are back yes?

    She smiles at me and pulls away sitting on the bed beside Bette as the rest of us take up positions around them, For as long as Bette will have me.

    TBC…Not a cliffhanger. See I can do it.

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    4. Nice. But Bette seems a little too calm, somehow. I think she’d be angry at the situation, the memory loss, and just a lot of things right now. (For what that’s worth.)

    8. Was it something I said? Just when I comment that you’re doing such a fine job with the two stories, one magically disappears. Ooh, you authors and your power trips! I’m looking forward to the ‘new and improved’ version.
      I’m laughing as I think of the police officers in my town, that Gracy would have been free and clear because none of them are former track stars still in shape! Hee hee. But you did a great job of setting the scene for the Detective, how he is affected professionally and personally by this case, and giving us a more full sense of his feelings when he apprehends Gracy. Nice that he could wind up with his colleagues as an audience.
      I also like how your story includes national and local outrage about this crime for what it is. Such a welcome vision in this time of intolerance and thinly-veiled gay-bashing by a wide variety of so-called leaders. So sad that it takes a tragedy for people to realize their compassion. I’ll continue to hope for something less dramatic but equally effective in real life, like all of us living our lives with dignity and grace and leading by example. Whoa, sorry to have gotten heavy there. But isn’t it nice to know the effect your writing can have?! Thanks so much.

    9. Great chapter. I’m glad the Detective caught 1 of those guys and now can’t wait to know what gonna happen next if they will find another guys too I hope they will. I’m happy to see all the girls see Tina and happy with them. Please post soon, thank you!

    10. Thanks for the update. So, this will be Bette & Tina’s baby. It’ll be interesting to see how Bette deal with the capture of her attackers and any potential trial. I really like the re-connection between B&T. Even though she can’t remember her, Bette still feels comforted & safe with Tina. nice touch.

    13. Wonderfull update. Still before the storm…..what does Bette have installed for us. Is she going to freak out or somthing. Or maybe show us the Porter charm. Post soon

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