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Bette’s Loss and Gain (Conclusion)
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Bette opened her up and Gail helped by scooting closer to the edge and spreading her legs more. Gail’s ***** was still engorged and the pink tip of it was visible between her full labia. Bette used her fingers to simply open her and peek at what was somewhat hidden. Bette slid her fingers in the wetness that was now sticky. She stared at Gail’s *****, examining it in a way she had never looked at her own with a mirror. Her hand skimmed down the swollen lips, inside to caress the many petaled folds. She looked closely and saw Gail’s hole contract and open, a new flow creeping out of her. “You smell so good.”
Gail reclined on her elbows, watching Bette take the lead. She was ready for Bette to do something.
Bette bent her head and did what felt perfectly right. She was unrestrained for the first time in her life, nothing felt clinical or calculated. Her tongue narrowed and worked her way from bottom to top, teasing Gail so easily. Gail reached down and opened herself up and held herself taut. Bette’s tongue swirled around the twitching hole, but she greatly wanted to purse her lips and wrap them around the almost purple *****. So she did. She sucked the hard nub into her mouth, while her chin bumped against her folds. Bette transitioned from sucking to licking as her tongue now circled Gail’s clitoris and she knew that she was doing it right. Gail moaned and squeezed Bette’s shoulder, fisted her hand in Bette’s hair, and then moved that hand to rub up and down Bette’s forearm. “Oh, you’re good at that. So good,” she said hoarsely and then moaned loudly.
Bette’s nose moved back and forth over Gail’s ***** while her tongue licked her labia and lapped at the liquid oozing from her hole. Bette never realized what a necessary tool her nose was in the act of lovemaking. Now, Gail was crying out with every flick of Bette’s long slender nose against her swollen core. “Oh, yes. Yes.”
Bette’s face was truly buried between Gail’s legs. Nothing else was going on in the world that wasn’t at that spot. Everything else was insignificant. The only thing that mattered to her was that her new lover found as much satisfaction in this act as Bette found performing it. Bette loved the taste and how Gail reacted. The whole time she was between her legs, Bette also moaned, humming against Gail’s overheated *****, managing a vibrating touch that sent the older woman sailing, floating, and then exploding. “Ah, *****. Yes. I’m coming.” Bette thought she’d cry. She felt like she had discovered something that the world needed or had solved the answer to all questions. She was responsible for a woman’s *****. It was her mouth, tongue, technique that had given her such pleasure. She felt honored and excited. A man’s climax was easy and as far as Bette was concerned took no special skill, but Gail had proven to her that a woman could experience such a high from both the receiving end and giving end. Bette ran her hands up Gail’s thighs, rubbed her calves, kissed her inner thighs.
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I just finished reading the entire story in one sitting and I am overwelmed. Gail had just the right amount of maturity and young Bette had just the right amount of immaturity. Everything was so believable and sweet. I have no idea how Alice sat through the telling without a cold shower at the end. Bravo, wonderfully compelling
God this was so amazing. You had so much raw emotion running through this whole story…i was suppoed to be in bed an hour ago to wake up for work in the morning. I read the forst two chapters and told myself i could finish tomorrow, but it was just too good. Wow…wow…
Excellent! It was made even better by having each chapter posted together so that I could read them all in one sitting. I haven’t put the laptop down since I started reading.
Awesome! I read them all – you got Bette totally right on. Careful the show may steal this story! And the music, I knew every song. Sugar Walls indeed.. write again soon.
Oh my God. This story was FANTASTIC! I couldn’t stop reading til I got to the end!
I sat up when I saw your name–excitedly I began to read. This story is amazing. Thank you for taking me into this voyage of self discovery. Love reading your works. Bravo!
Also wanted to say thank you for posting your entire story at once.
Okay I just read all of these and you are truly talented–your stories are so clear and vivid I feel like I know Bette a litte better. Thanks for sharing this. EXCELLENT!!!!!
This story is absolutely amazing. Thanks so much for sharing and for posting it all in one go. I truly enjoyed it.
That was an amazing journey…so powerful…I hope this isn’t the last we hear from you…I get so lost in your writing…beautiful portia…thank you.
BRILlIANT.
Thanks also for posting your entire story.
That was well written! Great story and thanks for posting it all at a go.
I had many things to do today but once I started your story I had to read through it all. Your writing is lively and vivid and great fun to read. Thank you so much.
Spectacular – wonderfully written throughout!! Hot and inviting!!
That was a wonderful story you are an excellent writer..But I wish you would have ended it with ore of a conclusion with Tina Please don’t end it here..
wow! every chapter was wonderful! i’m kind of dazed from the sheer power of the story itself and an added bonus of the imagery and your writing is astonding. very very good. thanks for writing this. :D
Wonderful story! Thanks!
Greaaaaaaaatttttt!!! thanks bunches…
Read your story into the wee hours of the morning. I just had to keep reading it was so beautiful. I love Bette and you really get her. Thanks for this great comming out story. I also want to say that your writting is wonderful, please give us more.
This was wonderful to read. Like every one else, I started the first chapter, thinking I would read a couple before going to bed. That didn’t happen, and the next thing I knew, it was 1:00…and I was wishing there was just one more chapter to read. Thank you so much. Your talent is big and out there for all to see…and is obvious with the very first sentence.
Bravo Portia! That was excellent. The detailed way you describe where they are, the dialogue…all of it is just fabulous. I look forward to more, of course! Thanks again for this.
Wow 5 stares. This is a amazing, every chapter I read is so much good and excellent! You do a great job and sharing this with us, I reall love it! Thank you so much for excellent story! I hope to see you on next time with more amazing story!
Loved this story. And I was psyched to see you had posted, as I used to read your stories when I first got into fan fic here. :D Excellent job. 5 stars!!