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Bette’s Loss and Gain (Conclusion)
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“You’re right, Gail, this is an awesome piece of real estate.”
“Location, location, location, love.” Gail panted as she tried to regain all the composure that had been pulled from her body. She tried to drag Bette back into the bed, but she was too weak, so she merely patted the space next to her and said, ‘Get up here.”
Bette crawled in next to her and they slid over to lie comfortably in bed. Gail turned to her and kissed her face. She pulled back and chuckled. “You should see how you look right now. You’re all slick with me.” She lightly touched Bette’s long lashes. “You know, your eyelashes are even wet.”
“It’s my new mascara.”
“Do you think there’s a market for it? Will it sell?” She laughed.
“It sold me,” Bette answered with all sincerity.
* * * * *
“I refuse to get turned on. I refuse to get turned on. I refuse to get turned on. I think I’ll have some coffee, after all,” Alice said. Alice was seated at the kitchen table, her head propped in her hand while Bette put another pod in the coffee maker.
“That’s what I meant, some things are hotter.”
“You got that right. So, OT., when did you finally make it back into the real world of school and papers?”
Bette walked over to the table and took a seat and continued with her memory of those special first nights.
“We made love the rest of the night and the next morning. The following afternoon, she proved that she was thirteen years older because she actually made me study. I have never, ever acted like such a baby. I was begging to get back in bed with her. It was like she opened this dam.” Bette laughed. “I was working on my paper and kept looking at her, sort of pointing with my eyes up to the loft and she’d shake her head. We were showered and dressed, but I wanted to get out of my clothes and start again. She looked at me, grabbed one of her *****, you know, a big handful of it and said, I kid you not, ‘No treats for girls who don’t study.’ Al, I swear. I groaned.” Bette rolled her eyes. “But it was great incentive to finish my work.”
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I just finished reading the entire story in one sitting and I am overwelmed. Gail had just the right amount of maturity and young Bette had just the right amount of immaturity. Everything was so believable and sweet. I have no idea how Alice sat through the telling without a cold shower at the end. Bravo, wonderfully compelling
God this was so amazing. You had so much raw emotion running through this whole story…i was suppoed to be in bed an hour ago to wake up for work in the morning. I read the forst two chapters and told myself i could finish tomorrow, but it was just too good. Wow…wow…
Excellent! It was made even better by having each chapter posted together so that I could read them all in one sitting. I haven’t put the laptop down since I started reading.
Awesome! I read them all – you got Bette totally right on. Careful the show may steal this story! And the music, I knew every song. Sugar Walls indeed.. write again soon.
Oh my God. This story was FANTASTIC! I couldn’t stop reading til I got to the end!
I sat up when I saw your name–excitedly I began to read. This story is amazing. Thank you for taking me into this voyage of self discovery. Love reading your works. Bravo!
Also wanted to say thank you for posting your entire story at once.
Okay I just read all of these and you are truly talented–your stories are so clear and vivid I feel like I know Bette a litte better. Thanks for sharing this. EXCELLENT!!!!!
This story is absolutely amazing. Thanks so much for sharing and for posting it all in one go. I truly enjoyed it.
That was an amazing journey…so powerful…I hope this isn’t the last we hear from you…I get so lost in your writing…beautiful portia…thank you.
BRILlIANT.
Thanks also for posting your entire story.
That was well written! Great story and thanks for posting it all at a go.
I had many things to do today but once I started your story I had to read through it all. Your writing is lively and vivid and great fun to read. Thank you so much.
Spectacular – wonderfully written throughout!! Hot and inviting!!
That was a wonderful story you are an excellent writer..But I wish you would have ended it with ore of a conclusion with Tina Please don’t end it here..
wow! every chapter was wonderful! i’m kind of dazed from the sheer power of the story itself and an added bonus of the imagery and your writing is astonding. very very good. thanks for writing this. :D
Wonderful story! Thanks!
Greaaaaaaaatttttt!!! thanks bunches…
Read your story into the wee hours of the morning. I just had to keep reading it was so beautiful. I love Bette and you really get her. Thanks for this great comming out story. I also want to say that your writting is wonderful, please give us more.
This was wonderful to read. Like every one else, I started the first chapter, thinking I would read a couple before going to bed. That didn’t happen, and the next thing I knew, it was 1:00…and I was wishing there was just one more chapter to read. Thank you so much. Your talent is big and out there for all to see…and is obvious with the very first sentence.
Bravo Portia! That was excellent. The detailed way you describe where they are, the dialogue…all of it is just fabulous. I look forward to more, of course! Thanks again for this.
Wow 5 stares. This is a amazing, every chapter I read is so much good and excellent! You do a great job and sharing this with us, I reall love it! Thank you so much for excellent story! I hope to see you on next time with more amazing story!
Loved this story. And I was psyched to see you had posted, as I used to read your stories when I first got into fan fic here. :D Excellent job. 5 stars!!