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Between a Rock and a Hard Place
What?
Her eyes dart away at my question. After a moments hesitation, they come to rest back on me. Her lips curl into a small grin, one that reaches her expressive blue eyes. They are alit and Im reminded of fireworks. The most explosive, bright fireworks.
I like this, she states, ever so simply, and reality falls away.
I like this too. I like how Dana can make everything so simple. Love, people say its the most complicated of emotions but loving Dana has been the easiest, most natural thing I have ever experienced. Like breathing. I like this world that she has created just for the two of us. In this simpler, black and white world, there are only a few truths but thats okay. Its easy to live with just a few truths. Easy. Uncomplicated. The truth is I love her, and she shes falling. Its perfect. Like make believe.
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Im hot, trembling, begging. She likes that. I know because her jaded eyes sparkle with mischief and glee. She braces herself over me and I cling to her helplessly. Everything is breaking apart, shattering because of her. Even with eyes closed, I see stars. Air escapes me in short gasps and inside Im laughing because its so clich, she leaves me breathless.
Dont ever leave me.
Her voice shakes with the request. I dont take the time to ponder that. Instead, I think about blue eyes, a dopey smile, and silky honey brown tendrils. I think about Dana. Dana who is finally coming around, and I feel a wistful smile tugging at the corners of my bruised lips. Im here with Shane. Shes driven me practically to the brink of insanity with her ministrations, and I can only think of Dana.
Her fingers flex tersely around my naked thigh, bringing my attentions back to her. I blanch at the thought of how well she knows me. Every time I study her features, I get nothing. This time is no different. I recall what she has just said to me moments before. The demand confounds me. A thousands questions fly through my head, but I refrain and only ask her one.
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WHOA!!! i can’t believe nobody has commented yet! this story is AMAZING! it’s almost painful to read it, but the emotions are so real! great job!
really well done — exceellent writing — very intense — ver
really well done — very intense — very well done — excellent writing — thanks a lot
I love where you took the storyline. It totally blew me away. Don’t wait too long to update.
The raw emotions displayed in this fic are wonderfully affective. I think the clearest proof I can find of this is the fact that as a die hard Dana/Alice fan I’m lost as to who I want Alice with. The emotions displayed by all three women are so intricately woven that I can’t find it in me to root for any of the couples presented before me. Simply because to do so would encourage pain to the one who is left behind. If this is a one shot, superb job. If this is a series, I can’t wait to see what’s next.
DAMN, this was good. I am speechless. All I can say is WOW
Damn…i can’t say anything else…just damn…wow