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Bewitched and Bewildered…A Halloween Challenge
Block after block Bette nervously looked back and forth between the streets going by and her steering wheel. About five minutes had gone by since they had passed Roosevelt and in that time her car had made three different left hand turns…never right…always to the left.
For a woman who craved control Bette was almost at the end of her wits. She had tried everything to stop her car. She’d tried to pull over and put it in park, but the car just kept on going. She’d tried to change the gear into Neutral thinking she could then put on the emergency brake, but the car kept going. And then just when she thought she was going completely crazy they took another left turn into a housing development with a big sign stating they had arrived at Pumpkin Patch Estates.
Natalie squealed in delight as they drove past house after house with glowing pumpkins on the front porches and Halloween decorations in the yard.
“Look it all these pumpkins,” she whispered in awe. “Where are we mommy?”
“I honestly don’t know sweetheart.” Bette too stared out at the street that looked like it was right out of a children’s storybook.
“Can we stop and go trick or treating here?” Natalie asked.
“I honestly don’t know that either,” Bette sighed in defeat, having let go of the steering wheel about two left hand turns before. They both stared in silence, their noses pressed up against the windows wondering what was coming next in their strange, out of this world adventure.
When they were about three quarters of the way up the street they both noticed that one house stood out from all the rest. Its pumpkins were bigger and seemed to glow brighter than…
“Look Mommy! The pumpkin faces are changing!” Natalie shrieked.
Bette looked to where her daughter was pointing, and sure enough the carved faces on the pumpkins on the porch railing seemed to slowly change to different expressions.
So caught up were they in watching the pumpkins that neither one of them realized that Bette’s precious car had made one last left turn, and it was into the driveway of the house with the moving pumpkins. Bette only tore her eyes from the pumpkins when she realized her car had not only stopped, but had automatically shifted into Park.
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Dainty says
Fantastic! It’s wonderful to see an offering from one of our longstanding writers. Thank you.
talaula says
Sweet post seahurst. Thank you
wkm says
Very cute. Thanks
azmama says
Thanks for posting Sea. You’re sorely missed.
monrazz says
Thank you for the post. Such a cute addition to the Halloween posts.
Christy says
Look what the black cat of Halloween brought us! A wonderful post from Seahurst! Thank you! Can we look forward to more of these?
SHAZ says
Very nice indeed, always love to read your writing
Zuzu's Petals says
Well that was a whole lot of fun Seahurst!! Wonderful see the challenges are back. (and You.)
Sharod says
That was a great post. So first the treat of the story and the trick of them never really meeting. You know that you must continue this story right, so that at some point, the two women actually do meet one another and etc., etc.
trecelovinit says
I got so excited when I saw a post from you!! That was truly a treat!
resultsonly says
nicely done Seahurst!
Tibetter24 says
That was incredibly cute!!!!
iHeartHeart says
Wow Seahurt, such an enjoyable and funny B&T/Bewitched tribute! You gave me a chuckle throughout, esp. Bette’s behind the wheel rants. Echoing Phacey & Sharod, a sequel would be sweet.
3raphael says
What a treat! I always love to read anything you write as it is always so fine. Thanks for the great story.
Querida says
That was fun! So nice to see a post from you.
BetteAndTinaForever says
you coming back with a story is a delightful surprise and so is this story…i kinda wanted to keep reading, is there chapter 2 maybe coming…please? LOL
favcouple says
Just absolutely wonderful. Thank you.
ut says
WOW that was great and sweet, love it. Thank you!
dulez says
I liked it, thank u for posting ;D
allyemmerson says
excellent – great premise and done as well as only you can sea !!
LuHfan says
it’s truly about bewitched and bewildered!!thanks for this fun & cute story!
mette hartmann says
What a wonderful treat seeing your name again. You´ve been missed. Thanks for a beautiful Halloween post.
didi1956 says
Amazing,thank you.
brwnsuga says
Wow, seahurst, that was absolutely an awesome story. It even freaked me out. LOL.
Emae29 says
OMG, have I missed you! Thanks for the wonderful treat!
akalittlered says
Sweet snd Amazing!!!! Thank you Very Happy to see your Post
kbergin47 says
Really cute. Thank you!
phacey says
WOW!! seeing a new post from you is such a great treat this halloween! But i think that this story needs a sequel i mean you cant just let this to end like that.. Bette and Tina have to meet each other again whether in the real or magical world.. So loved this, thanks Sea!:-D
tibettenation1 says
Wow that was entertaining!