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Beyond…sequel to Now That Was Different
Watching as herself and Shane had a conversation on how Shane was really, truly over Carmen, Bette started to understand what was going on. Mark, there trusted friend was video taping them. The worst type of voyeurism.
Hearing a noise Bette looked up from the monitor to see Mark standing in the doorway. His eyes widened to saucers at seeing Bette standing behind his desk.
What are you doing here?
Bette straightened, I came to borrow your video camera.
Mark licked his lips and cast his eyes to the monitors and then to Bettes face, It isnt what you think it is.
It looks like youve been videotaping us all for a long time, Bette stated calmly
Mark sucked in a breath at hearing this from the woman before him. Looking around he seemed not to know what he was going to do
Say something Mark.
What do you want me to say, Mark shot at her
Tell me why?
Mark frowned at this. Why was Bette being so calm?
I…was making a movie.
About Shane and Jenny and by extension all of us that went to her house?
Mark swallowed, Yes.
Bette grabbed the video camera off the desk, You are scum, she said softly, The worst of the worst.
Mark flinched ever so slightly at this.
This has moved beyond making a movie hasnt it, Bette asked grabbing a tape off the shelf nearest her, What is this, lets see Shane Reading. You are taping her doing the most mundane of tasks, Bette grabbed another tape, Shane Sleeping.
Stop that, Mark yelled referring to her looking at the tapes
You You are obsessed with Shane, Bette exclaimed her voice rising, You are obsessed with my best friend Ive got to tell her. She has a right to know what you are doing to her.
This is when something inside Mark shifted. He couldnt let Bette tell Shane. He couldnt let his girl know what he was doing for her, this was all for her. He advanced on Bette grabbing her around the throat and shoving her up against the wall.
To say Bette wasnt expecting this would have been an understatement of epic proportions. She was so caught off guard that she didnt immediately react. When Mark started squeezing her airway she knew she had to react. Mark was pushing against her windpipe and vocal cords with both thumbs, and pushing hard.
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(45 votes, average: 3.27 out of 5)
Wow,that chapter was harsh man. The whole dream makes me so confused but I did like the chapter! Continue with the good work.
Rebakathy – I love your writing style very much.
Hey girl with as many story lines going on as you have how do you ever keep them straight. This is great. Now it gets creepy with her mom coming back to warn her. I have to tell you my mom did come back not to warn me but to let me know that everything was good. So it really does happen just like that as a waking dream. Awesome story thanks for your post.
Hey Rebakathy love it that was so Amazing Story Please post soon.
Good job! I love this Carmen and Bette together…hot! But we all know she belongs with T. please update us soon.
Great chapter and I know I have to go to sleep. I loved every word and I am very proud of you.
That was great.. Don’t tell me something happens to Carmen…Please Post Soon…
Hey! You’re leaving us hanging! Great so far, please keep it going.
I love this story. Your mind is just so terribly creative. Now Bette can’t speak for a year? And the sign language thing was a very nice touch. I feel like you are setting us up for some heartbreak. And I like that you highlight the depth of Bette’s relationship with Carmen. Tina validated its significance as well. Okay, I think i’ve rambled long enough. Great post and I can’t wait for the next one. I’ve gotta find out what that dream is foreshadowing.
Love this story Reba=P lol…CR00 is hilarious…’So when is carmen going to die and from what?’…is that the plan? Like MTS, what is that dream foreshadowing? I wonder what is gonna be Bette’s downfall this time?…oh well, I guess we’re gonna have to wait and see. Nicely done Reba, please do continue!
Good story line. I’m interested to see what happens when Bette and Tina get together with Carmen around.
Loved your story Rebakathy, but yeah, when is Carmen going to die?
ha that was diffrent… can´t wait on till the next chapter… hope it will come soon…….
Now Reba that was a super update. the drama and all the confusion. Now this warning Bette get´s from her mother – this sounds interesting and in a way very strange. Give us an update soon you hear. Keep up the good work.
OOOh, that dream! Yikes! Sounds scary….I hope it’s not foreshadowing someone close to Bette dying. I’m already looking for your next chapter…Thanks
So when is carmen going to die and from what??