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Beyond…sequel to Now That Was Different
The police drew their guns as they saw Mark stumbling out of the studio.
Freeze, one of the officers shouted
Mark stopped and held up his hands as the police advanced on him. The paramedics ran into the studio as Shane followed them. She saw the paramedics kneeling next to Bette who was crouched on the floor gasping for air.
B, whats going on, Shane asked from the doorway turning to see Mark thrown into the police car and then turned back to Bette as the police car sped off, What did Mark do to you?
Stepping in closer she saw an ugly bruise, shaped like fingers, around Bettes neck. She stumbled back as she realized that Mark had tried to strangle Bette.
Why would he do this to you?
Bette waved a hand toward the desk as the paramedics were probing her throat. Slowly Shane went over to the desk and saw the monitors. They were showing the inside of her house. She turned back as Bette was being loaded on to the stretcher.
Hes been taping us?
Bette nodded her head as best she could from the c-collar. Lifting the stretcher they started to roll it outside. Bette waved her arm for them to stop and motioned for Shane to come closer.
C…Ca…
You want me to call Carmen?
A small nod.
Well meet you at the hospital.
Weve got to go maam, the paramedic stated to Shane
Which hospital, Shane asked
Memorial.
Shane stepped out of the way as the paramedics took Bette out of there and to the hospital. Looking around the room she saw dozens upon dozens of tapes. How did things go so wrong? Grabbing the phone Shane dialed Carmens cell phone.
Hello, said Carmen
Hey Carmen its Shane.
Hey Shane whats up?
You need to meet me at Memorial hospital.
Why what happened, Carmen asked in fear
Mark attacked Bette.
There was silence on the line.
Carmen are you there?
Did you just tell me that Mark attacked Bette?
Yes, he tried to strangle her.
Why the ***** would he do that?
Shane looked around the room, Ill explain later. Just meet me at the hospital. Ill call the girls. You just get there.
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(45 votes, average: 3.27 out of 5)
Wow,that chapter was harsh man. The whole dream makes me so confused but I did like the chapter! Continue with the good work.
Rebakathy – I love your writing style very much.
Hey girl with as many story lines going on as you have how do you ever keep them straight. This is great. Now it gets creepy with her mom coming back to warn her. I have to tell you my mom did come back not to warn me but to let me know that everything was good. So it really does happen just like that as a waking dream. Awesome story thanks for your post.
Hey Rebakathy love it that was so Amazing Story Please post soon.
Good job! I love this Carmen and Bette together…hot! But we all know she belongs with T. please update us soon.
Great chapter and I know I have to go to sleep. I loved every word and I am very proud of you.
That was great.. Don’t tell me something happens to Carmen…Please Post Soon…
Hey! You’re leaving us hanging! Great so far, please keep it going.
I love this story. Your mind is just so terribly creative. Now Bette can’t speak for a year? And the sign language thing was a very nice touch. I feel like you are setting us up for some heartbreak. And I like that you highlight the depth of Bette’s relationship with Carmen. Tina validated its significance as well. Okay, I think i’ve rambled long enough. Great post and I can’t wait for the next one. I’ve gotta find out what that dream is foreshadowing.
Love this story Reba=P lol…CR00 is hilarious…’So when is carmen going to die and from what?’…is that the plan? Like MTS, what is that dream foreshadowing? I wonder what is gonna be Bette’s downfall this time?…oh well, I guess we’re gonna have to wait and see. Nicely done Reba, please do continue!
Good story line. I’m interested to see what happens when Bette and Tina get together with Carmen around.
Loved your story Rebakathy, but yeah, when is Carmen going to die?
ha that was diffrent… can´t wait on till the next chapter… hope it will come soon…….
Now Reba that was a super update. the drama and all the confusion. Now this warning Bette get´s from her mother – this sounds interesting and in a way very strange. Give us an update soon you hear. Keep up the good work.
OOOh, that dream! Yikes! Sounds scary….I hope it’s not foreshadowing someone close to Bette dying. I’m already looking for your next chapter…Thanks
So when is carmen going to die and from what??