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Beyond…sequel to Now That Was Different
Okay, Carmen stated ending the call
Shane threw down the phone and ran into the house. Grabbing her cell phone and keys she ran out the door jumping into her truck and speeding off toward Memorial. She dialed the girls on the way. They all agreed to meet her there but all demanded for Shane to tell them why the ***** Mark would attack Bette when they saw her.
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Carmen rushed into the ER and up to the desk, Bette Porter! Where is she?
Maam are you family?
It doesnt matter if Im family, she means everything to me. Tell me where she is.
Im sorry maam but…
Just as Carmen was about to lunge across the desk at this woman she heard Shanes voice. Turning she saw Shane coming toward her.
Shane whats going on. Have you heard anything?
The two friends hugged tightly, The Doctors wont tell me anything because Im not family. Kit is on her way.
Almost as if conjured up Kit burst through the door with the girls in tow. Everyone hugged each other tightly and went to the waiting room.
Shane tell us what happened, Kit began, On the phone you said that Bette was attacked. By whom?
Mark, said Shane
Why the ***** would Mark attack Bette, Jenny exclaimed
Shane turned her attention to Jenny, Hes apparently been videotaping us for a long time.
When you say videotaping you mean…
There are camera all throughout the house.
Jenny sucked in a breath at this, Wow. Bette found this out?
Shane nodded her head, Right.
And so the guy attacked her, Dana asked, What did he do to her?
You said he tried to strangle her, said Carmen, He strangled my beloved?
The others were surprised by the strangling part.
You should have seen her neck, Shane started, There were already bruises on it. She couldnt seem to catch her breath. I think he injured something in there.
Just as everyone was about to speculate further a greying man in a white lab coat came over to them, Are you the family of Bette Porter?
Everyone stood.
Im her sister Kit, said Kit, Will she be okay?
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(45 votes, average: 3.27 out of 5)
Wow,that chapter was harsh man. The whole dream makes me so confused but I did like the chapter! Continue with the good work.
Rebakathy – I love your writing style very much.
Hey girl with as many story lines going on as you have how do you ever keep them straight. This is great. Now it gets creepy with her mom coming back to warn her. I have to tell you my mom did come back not to warn me but to let me know that everything was good. So it really does happen just like that as a waking dream. Awesome story thanks for your post.
Hey Rebakathy love it that was so Amazing Story Please post soon.
Good job! I love this Carmen and Bette together…hot! But we all know she belongs with T. please update us soon.
Great chapter and I know I have to go to sleep. I loved every word and I am very proud of you.
That was great.. Don’t tell me something happens to Carmen…Please Post Soon…
Hey! You’re leaving us hanging! Great so far, please keep it going.
I love this story. Your mind is just so terribly creative. Now Bette can’t speak for a year? And the sign language thing was a very nice touch. I feel like you are setting us up for some heartbreak. And I like that you highlight the depth of Bette’s relationship with Carmen. Tina validated its significance as well. Okay, I think i’ve rambled long enough. Great post and I can’t wait for the next one. I’ve gotta find out what that dream is foreshadowing.
Love this story Reba=P lol…CR00 is hilarious…’So when is carmen going to die and from what?’…is that the plan? Like MTS, what is that dream foreshadowing? I wonder what is gonna be Bette’s downfall this time?…oh well, I guess we’re gonna have to wait and see. Nicely done Reba, please do continue!
Good story line. I’m interested to see what happens when Bette and Tina get together with Carmen around.
Loved your story Rebakathy, but yeah, when is Carmen going to die?
ha that was diffrent… can´t wait on till the next chapter… hope it will come soon…….
Now Reba that was a super update. the drama and all the confusion. Now this warning Bette get´s from her mother – this sounds interesting and in a way very strange. Give us an update soon you hear. Keep up the good work.
OOOh, that dream! Yikes! Sounds scary….I hope it’s not foreshadowing someone close to Bette dying. I’m already looking for your next chapter…Thanks
So when is carmen going to die and from what??