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Bisous; #18
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“I don’t…I…I don’t want Bette to…to be here…” I said through my sobs, “Wh…why is she even…even here?”
I heard Tash sigh softly, “Why don’t you want her here, babe?”
“She’s…she’s ‘pose to marry Tina…”
“She called it off, babe.”
My heart danced a little with hope, “Wh…why did she call it off?” I said, trying to sound like I didn’t care.
“I’m not too sure about that,” Tash explained, “All I know is that I called her to tell her what had happened and the next thing I knew, she was back.”
I curled up into a ball, trying to restrict my movements because of my new acquired blindness, “Please, Tash, I just want to be alone now.”
“Ok, I’ll just be outside with them.”
I pulled my blanket over me as I heard her slowly walking away.
This is the worst punishment. I had never felt more lost and alone in my life. How would they ever understand how I felt?
I might never be able to see anyone or anything ever again; why did this have to happen to me. I wanted to die. There was just nothing to live for anymore. The last thing I wanted was anyone to feel sorry for me, to feel obligated to stay by my side because of my handicap. I just wanted everyone to go, just leave me.
As I lay under the covers, I could hear the voices of people outside. I couldn’t tell who was who, but I knew they were talking about me.
“I’ll stay with her,” someone said, “I want to…I want to take care of her…”
“Aw, darling, that’s sweet,” someone replied, “But I don’t know if…”
“Mrs. Peabody…”
“Just Peggy is fine, dear.”
“Peggy, I think it’ll be good for Helena to have someone around through this time…”
“I agree, it’s just that I don’t want her to be aggravated anymore than she already is…”
“But I also do think that it will be good for her to have someone familiar around her to look after her, at least for the time being.”
“And no one knows her better than I do, Peggy.”
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amazing i understand why Helena is acting out i mean Bette moves and nearly gets married to Tina but at least shes here for Lena in a time of need. it was beautifully written i hope Lena dont lose her sight how will she see the lovely ladies who want to be with her now. I love Tasha, i wonder what Helena has decided about her now…Im glad you have decided to write some more for Teenage Love Affair i have missed it i must admit. So i will be waiting for a new post.Yes im very settled now chick, i dont know L5 has helped alot with my story writing…i just cant help but think of new things i want to write about i just cant get it down fast enough…but hope you like y new installment im hoping to do a longer chapter so hopefully i will succeed.BeLena belong together…actually my gf dont agree but we all think otherwise.update soon ok.more next time i want to see at least 6 pages lmao…Caramel :) :) :)
God, this story is torture but great. I think Helena getting her sight back itn’t the issue…..at this point all she need is love.
To bad Helena can’t see. Because I bet if she could she would see nothing but love in Bette’s eyes. You are on the verge of writing a Belena masterpeace. I have read many Belena fics. And I must say you share the spotlight with some great ones. Thanks for the update!
one word…spectacular!!!!
You know,i dont ever get tired of telling you how i love your writing and this story..Ouch..you know how it kills me to want to see Belena together.thank you for such an awesome chapter…cant wait for more.:-)
I’m not sure if I should smile or cry.
Oh Helena, I totally get why she doesn’t want to hear it from Bette..but I still wish she would :) lovelovelove the story
Holy Heaven! This is torturous! I don’t know whether to applaud with glee at your wonderful writing and courage or to shoot daggers at you with my blessed seeing eyes for all the pain and emotions you’re eliciting. Awww, what the heck! I’ll do both! o_o :P :) Thanks euni!
I am freeking speachless Euni, how very heart breaking for Helena. Bette is going to need a wheelbarrel of courage and a strong heart to give it all to Helena. Thank you, Md
Hey Cuz… ummmm… refresh… LMAO… Love ya, JC
Oh gosh, EU! You’ve got me near tears. I can feel Helena’s pain. I understand her not wanting Bette around, but I sure hope that Bette is stubborn and won’t leave. I’d probably do the same if I was in Helena’s shoes, though. My poor baby just can’t get out of the way of turmoil. It’s following her everywhere. This is heart-wrenching watching her go through all of this and not being able to help her through it. I pray that this blindness is only temporary and her sight will return once her optical nerves heal… or something. Hang in there, Belena. You both will find your way to each other soon… I hope. Bette, stay strong and don’t let Helena push you too far away. Just take what she dishes out and don’t take it to heart. She’ll probably be a total Biatch to you for a while, because she’s angry and feeling sorry for herself right now. EU, you are just squeezing my heart, girl! I love all of the drama. I know you have a really great way of telling this story and you keep improving with each update. Keep up what you are doing, because I am loving every word of it! Thanks for posting and…..uhmmmm… not to sound greedy…. but…. may I have another, please? =)
Gosh I just caught up with this one and I can’t describe the emotions that are going through my body right now. I feel so bad for Hel’s, what are you doing to her Euni? You and Ash are giving our favorite girl a very hard time :( but I love both your stories and your writing is just awesome. I hope that Hel’s won’t stay blind forever and that she and Bette can work things out between them. Great job hun. PPS