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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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“They
didn’t let them bring the movies over, huh?” said the blonde, who
Helena recalled introduced himself as Dave over the phone. When Helena
arched an eyebrow in a sign of subdued curiosity, he continued, “We get
tons of divorced parents in here. Buying double copies of movies,
books, and video games is a pretty common practice.”
“At least I am not alone in my misery,” commented Helena in droll but playful humor.
“I
know, right?” Dave chuckled and walked with Helena over to Alice and
the children as the writer finished an odd side to side dance that had
them in a fit of giggles. “Hey guys!” he said brightly, smiling as they
turned to face him. “Find any good movies yet?”
“Alice found a movie about pirates!” exclaimed Wilson.
“It has kids hunting for lost pirate treasure,” Jun Ying added excitedly.
“And
one of them does this funny dance,” said Wilson as he took over
speaking again. He looked up at Alice and tugged on the pants leg to
her jeans lightly. “Do the dance again? To show Mummy?”
“Yeah! Show Mummy,” said Jun Ying eagerly. “It was funny.”
Turning
a little red and looking embarrassed, Alice nevertheless offered the
children a huge smile. Ruffling their hair as she said, “How could I
refuse two requests like that?” Then she turned to face Helena and
Dave, cleared her throat and gave a partial bow. “For your viewing
pleasure, I give you the truffle shuffle.” This said, Alice did the
same odd side to side shuffling dance from before, ending it after a
few seconds to the giddy applause of Jun Ying and Wilson. Something
both Helena and Dave felt compelled to join in with as Alice’s dance
was not only hilarious but an incredibly sweet gesture on her part that
was done simply to make the kids happy. Bowing again, but with more
flourish, Alice declared in faux haughty tones, “Thank you, thank you!
I’m the newest dancing superstar.”
“Now
I simply must know. What film contains not only such a fine dance but a
daring hunt for pirate treasure as well?” asked Helena warmly,
genuinely wanting to know the answer.
“Just
the best kids movie of all time,” crowed Alice, nodding at Wilson and
Jun Ying who held it up high for Helena to see. “Goonies!”
“Goonies
rules,” commented Dave as Helena took the movie and read the back of
it. “It’s definitely one of the greatest kids movies ever and Chunk is
totally the best character.”
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.