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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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“I know, right?” said Alice, smiling hugely at Helena, obviously
pleased that Helena could see why she liked the group. “And look at
Lena now. This always happens, you know? Julia gets all pissy and runs
off and Lena has to go find her. I bet you anything that’s what’s going
to happen. But maybe this time a guy picks up on Julia and Lena sees
it.”
“That’s not at all fair to Lena,” said Helena peevishly, deciding that
between the two fake lesbians or former fake lesbians, that is, she
liked Lena better. She was currently featured in a close up and Helena
cursed her eyes as she missed another opportunity to figure out what
kind of sports car the redhead was driving. “Darling,” she murmured,
nudging Alice. “Are you able to tell what sort of vehicle she has?”
Squinting as the car got another close up and went through a tunnel,
Alice said slowly, “Let me see.” She nibbled on her lip in deep
concentration and Helena was instantly endeared that the blonde was
taking her minor request so seriously. “Camaro!” she crowed after a few
moments of intense study. “She’s driving a bitchin’ Camaro,” said
Alice, giggling at her own joke.
“I love that song as well,” revealed Helena with a smile.
“The Dead Milkmen rule,” Alice announced before turning her attention
back to the music video, prompting Helena to do the same. She groaned
immediately and waved at the screen which featured Julia climbing into
a scruffy though handsome looking man’s car. It wasn’t a car that
Helena felt compelled to discover the vehicle type though. To have such
curiosity seemed like an odd betrayal to her favoritism towards Lena.
“See! I was right! She’s getting picked up by that guy. Now
Lena will end up catching her.”
“Perhaps he thinks she’s a street walker in that outfit,” Helena
remarked, the words escaping her lips before she was able to process
them completely. Alice was silent for a moment, staring at Helena wide
eyed, then she broke into a mass of giggles. “I cannot believe I said
that,” whispered Helena, completely mortified and turning red as she
covered her mouth with her hand. “Only minutes ago I was speaking of
how these poor girls were abused as they were forced into that life and
now I’ve insulted one of them.” She turned to face Alice who was trying
to control her fit of giggles and failing utterly as Helena playfully
accused, “You and your blasted adorable features have turned me into
some manner of petty twit!”
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.