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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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“It’s okay,” said Alice, relieved and smiling at Helena and sighing
when she felt the British woman toying with her hair. For some reason
it always relaxed her when anyone did that but lately she found it
especially good when Helena did it. The brunette had a strange talent
for playing with her hair and when she did it, Alice always ended up
feeling totally relaxed. She peered at the heiress and wore a hopeful
expression. “Can we watch the music video or would it upset you?
Kamirah just said they’re nineteen and no longer pretending to be
dykes.”
“Who is Kamirah?” asked Helena blankly, resisting the urge to look
around for this strangely named person that was lurking somewhere in
her house.
“The VJ on the show, the one who’s talking,” Alice laughed, poking
Helena in the side and waving at the television and the girl with blue
hair pulled back in pigtails.
“Oh,” said Helena, frowning and staring at the television. She opened
and closed her mouth, thinking better of saying the comment then
deciding it was Alice and it was better to say it anyway than have
Alice ask her later what she had been about to say. Something that had
already happened twenty eight times in the span of their newly formed
friendship. “Who would name their child such a thing? Her name sounds
like an electronic device. Is that wise? She must have been teased
terribly in grammar school.”
Her laughter increasing, Alice replied, “I think she made the name up,
sweetie. You know, to sound cool or something. So is it okay if we
watch the video? It’s about to start so I really need to know if you
want me to flip channels or not.”
“Please, I beg of you, do not return to your heinous habit of flipping
the channels,” Helena groaned before taking the remote from Alice’s
hand and flinging it across the couch. “We shall watch this music video
featuring these once scandalously underaged Russian singers.”
“Yay!” said Alice, squirming in her seat and not seeming to care that
the precious remote was no longer in her grasp. When they first decided
to while away the hours by talking and watching television, she had
declared the remote to be hers and Helena, not being one for arguments,
simply gave in with a shrug. She clapped her hands lightly and beamed
at the British woman. “Just forget their underage roots and watch,
okay? I bet you’ll love this video for all the ***** drama it will show.
They rule at portraying a classic drama filled ***** couple.”
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.