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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Four
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“I thought they had abandoned the facade of portraying lesbians,” said
Helena, still feeling slightly bothered by the group’s origins but
willing to at least try and watch this video with an open mind. If only
for Alice’s sake since the blonde appeared honestly happy about it
simply being in existence. “Or did I hear incorrectly?”
“No you didn’t hear incorrectly,” said Alice teasingly, bumping Helena
gently and chuckling. “I love the way you talk, you know?” She shook
her head then continued, “They’re not pretending to be lesbians but the
***** drama just naturally exudes from them. It kind of sucks they’re
not pretending anymore because they made the best fake lesbians ever.
They should be on a soap opera or something, they’re that good.”
“Ah,” said Helena, acting as if she understood but in reality not understanding in the least.
“Just watch the video and you’ll see,” Alice advised her wisely,
clearly able to tell that Helena was confused on the subject of why
Tatu was truly great. “And just for information’s sake, the brunette is
Julia and the redhead is Lena.”
Not bothering to ask why she would need to know this odd piece of
information, Helena fixed her eyes ahead to watch the video that was
already beginning. The video opened at the outside of a diner late at
night and a sports car pulling up to park. Frowning slightly, Helena
admired the car and found herself wondering what type it was.
“The music she’s listening to on the radio? That’s All The Things She
Said, their hit single,” said Alice informatively, shifting in her seat
and grinning. A redhead got out of the car and Alice waved at the
screen. “That’s Lena, right? And that’s Julia,” she gestured to a
strangely dressed brunette.
“What in bloody ***** is Julia wearing?” questioned Helena, unable to
stop herself from saying this. The girl looked like she was dressed in
a strangely futuristic cavemen outfit that included a large puffy
jacket made out of hopefully faux bear skin.
“I’m not sure,” said Alice absently. “She always dresses bad if she’s
not wearing the Catholic school girl garb. Anyway, all those pictures
they’re showing? They’re parodies of the tabloids who did articles on
them when they debuted that were about them breaking up and not being
real lesbians but just a cheap gimmick. Which is totally
true, but still.”
“The song is good thus far,” Helena remarked, a little surprised that
she found herself liking their music. Currently, Julia and Lena were
sitting down inside of the diner and starting what looked to be a
heated argument. “Well,” murmured Helena in thoughtful tones, tilting
her head as she watched Julia storm away in a huff. “I’m beginning to
see why you view them as very talented pretend lesbians. That spat was
something from the pages of our handbook.”
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WOW!….ur talanted. this story is Sexci & swt..o how i luv it!..it’s turning out great but damn you keep making me wait…Hell it’s worth the wait..hopefully expecting more sexual tension…Keep up the great wrk..please Post Soon!..
Dreiser please don’t make us wait so long again for another chapter! Really really good.. Like your style of writing, very similar to Sulks yet a little different.. please update soon..
I love how people think Helena being civil, nice and sweet is surprising when you see how good she was to the Blob. But whatever!
Anyway. You know I think this chapter kicks all kinds of ass, but I totally loved the first scene in the video store with the kids all well-behaved and Alice doing that dance and aw.
Hee. And during the movie marathon,
DAMNATION!
I hit “enter” before I could finish my thought somehow, but you’re used to that from me from our chats.
Anyway. So I loved how cute Helena was during the movie marathon, half-hissing in Alice’s ear and finding her not amusing anymore, only not really, lo. I, too, reject Twinky Winky is gay.
Ah, and the Mormons or Girl Scouts line. DUDE! You KNOW my thing with them! Salty Mormons and Nefarious Cookie Plots! Ah! And that reminds me of this South Park episode I saw recently…anyway. Aw, that part where Helena hoped Winniw wouldn’t embarass her in front of Alice like she did with Tina? Awww. It killed.
And Winnie. You know I want to punch her, but now I want to squash her too, like the cricket I left trapped under a cup when I left my office.
The “The writer was so terribly kind to her it was hard not to think of her romantically. But Helena tried to stop as Alice wasn’t in the right place for such things and she had enough of falling for women who were unavailable to her to attempt it one more time. Even if the woman was someone as special as she found Alice Pieszecki to be.” was so good, seriously. I think it just nailed who Helena is as a person.
And you know, Winnie and her reasons for taking the kids to Disneyland were exactly what I thought they would be when you revealed them. Because she never seemed particularly interested in them on the show. She sucks ass.
And the under-the-bed scene. Ahh, God, that killed. Hee. I knew all the cute bits were coming up, like “you’re in my spot” or Alice trying to be gentlemanly, but when they came, it still killed me. And Helena’s blush when Alice told her why she can’t come out yet.
Hee. Jun Ying the card shark. Ah!
And the Tatu thing. You already know my opinion on that, lol.
Ah. I loved this chapter so much. It just kicked all kinds of ass and was so true to who Helena is.
Hooray for our Helacious dinghy with the super spy and the super cute writer, lol
*Love* it.
Nothing makes my day more then seeing that you have updated your story. It’s even nicer when it’s been less then a week since your last update. It’s kind of like finding a twenty dollar bill in your pocket that you didn’t remember having, just makes you day. GREAT STORY. But everything you write is great. Can I be the President of your Fan Club. LOL Deb
Makes me almost like Helena, Love the interaction she has with her children. Alice does such a wonderful job with them. Under the bed part was so cute. Just to keep the children from hearing the mommies. thanks
You’ve done the impossible. . .I ALMOST like Helena. When will she finally share her feelings with Alice?
Yeah Helena being civil, nice, and sweet! Oh my amazing.