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Blind (Chap 14)
“So what are you waiting? You don’t seem like the person that can hold up your feelings or your pants too long?”
“Al, she means everything to me, I just don’t want to scare her off… besides… I’m not even sure she’s interested in me or any other women in that way…”
“What way? The lesbian kind of way? Bette… are you blind? Are you sure you’ve gained your eye sight back… hello… can you see this?” Alice waving her hands up in the air with her middle finger…
“Al!!”
“Bette, can’t you see that she’s all over you? How she reacted around you? Can’t you hear her tone of voice when she’s talking to you?”
With Alice’s question, I see how Tina is so clingy to me… how our arms linked when we walked together, how she lent on me when we’re sitting together, how our body touched when we’re lying beside each other, how the room brighten when she is there, how her eyes lit up and she became more lively when I walked into a room… how she speaks to me in her soft soothing voice… how her tingling sounds made my stomach tingle when we’re on the phone, like it was her tingling feelings that made me tingle as well… oh gosh… I did realise all of these but my ‘not so confident’ side decided to push all that signs away.
“Well by the look on your face Porter… I guess I’m right aren’t I?” Alice smirked mischievously.
“Yea…” I was so afraid on that admittance… “But Al, how do I know that she really likes me… you know… she had been telling me that… well… she had not told me directly… when I asked her does she like girl she just shrugged the question off like nothing.”
“Hear yourself Porter, she didn’t deny it to your face right?”
“But still… how do I find out?”
Alice’s face lighted up… “Hell no… I’m going to do this on my own.” I quickly stopped Alice in her trance of some freaky ideas.
“Oh ok Porter, what are you going to do? And WHEN are you going to find out?”
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(66 votes, average: 3.30 out of 5)
No, we are just beginning. Next chapter..PLEASE
No please don’t stop here! you are doing a great job all this time, your story is so lovely i think that there are a lot of story for this fiction!
Zabo, thank you so much for this chapter, that was so great and so well done! Loved the way Bette turned her jealousy and frustration into courage to ‘show’ Tina her feelings, and then how she chose to tell her truth! So amazing. But I’ve got to agree with all of the above, you cannot stop there… Please grant us with at least one more chapter, one of finally shared love, whatever rating you choose to give to it! ;) Please, please don’t end here… Thanks!
Oh no you don’t!That was Great! I’m with everyone else here…On with the sex!I think you can muster up a few more chappys after that!You are doing great, don’t stop PLEASE
NO ZABO! NO!
Did you say the end? I think not, you are banned to your room until you put out a few more chapters! That was a wonderful story and I would love to see it continue but you did bring the two girls together so what more could I ask for.
The end? Oh no! Tell me is isn’t so! That was great how Bette told Tina the truth without Tina even asking. Great story…I hope you will continue!
THIS CAN’T END!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Are you crazy? You just got these two together. Their passion is hot, you’ve got to keep going. (please)
wow
Oh hell no you can’t end it there! I vote for at least one more chapter. *cough*NC-17*cough* ;)
Great Story!!!!! Sorry to see it end. Thank you PPS
1st brb
Nooooooooooooooo!!! U can’t leave us hanging love that. Please. I need to read how wonderful it is and how they are now both complete, and yea a NC-17, pretty please!!
YES that was so great. Bette took the risk and NO not the end. Thanks for this great story
No not the end, please (pouty face)
lmao @ Alice ‘i think i’ve forgot to lock my door’ and then she pulled Dana out with her, i love the way Bette did her ‘truth’ please give us one more, i agree with Lament, we need an NC17
NO, NO NO NONONONONONONON….pls not the end!!!!
No way, don’t end it. Love the story.
I loved it, but I realy want it to continue… If it ends I’ll have nothing to jump up and down like a clown for :( Please continue :)
Zabo..I hope this is just the beginning. You can now start the sequel. Thank you for writing this story for us.
no no no not the end do you want me and you to fall out, well please coninue with this wonderful story
Oh man is sad to see this story ending, I though you gonna let them start their dating and first time make love and you know all the fun and hot stuff come. Anyway hope you will continue the story and please don’t ending like this, its killing us here. Good story and love it, thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to see you soon, thanks!!!!!!!!!
no, not the end…please, continue, this is so good, i realy loved the way you finally made them to open up and see the truth…(love alice btw too)…so continue please and don’t even think of stopping here…thank you
Hell no!! give them some happy moments before happy ever after.
Brilliant. And SO worth the wait to see them get together so sweetly! Thanks.
Noooooooooo Zabo… Please… Not the end?! you can’t do that to me, I get back all excited to read an update and now ‘the end’? Please please please continue? *puppydogface*