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Boundary Between Fear and Love – Chapter 5
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Al, hello? You ok? She startled me out of my thoughts. Her face lined with concern and worry. Youve been standing at the door for like 30 seconds. Are you coming in?
What? Yeah. I said walking over to her. I wrapped my arms around her waist. Im not sure how I got lucky enough to do this whenever I want, but it feels so good. She wrapped her arms around me and gave a little squeeze.
You ok? You look a little lost in your head. And Al, you get scary when you do that. She said as playfully ruffled my hair.
Yeah, scary, rahr! She laughs as my feeble attempt at a roar. And it is pretty feeble. I smile at her, Yeah. Im ok. I said, placing my head into the crook of her neck as she lowers her head to rest on mine. I was just thinking about that night, you know, 4 am.
I could feel the smile spread across her face. Again? I plan on you being here a lot, am I going to lose you to your thoughts every time you go up those stairs?
Its not every time. Its just almost every time, and especially at night, cause, you know, it was night. Oh and when Im with you, cause well, you were there. I could go on and on. I dont even notice when I do it, but Ive been told that I have a tendency to babble. Im not sure I buy it.
Yes, I was. And I am so glad I was. She leans down and kisses me quickly, Al, Im going to go get some water, want something? She kisses the top of my head and walks towards the kitchen.
No thanks, Hon. I scream into the kitchen, not that I needed to scream, the kitchen isnt that far from where I am, but for some reason, when someones in another room, I tend to yell, like there is a concrete barrier. Luckily, Dana tolerates this in me. Im not so sure I would if the situation was reversed. I tend to have less patience with everything. Wait, Dane, yeah, can you bring me a water?
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I know I already told you this but it can’t be said enough. Nobody writes Alice better than you, I would gladly take your version of Danish over the one on TV. You have just made my day.
There was a lot that I liked about this chapter, but I’m just going to comment on the three I loved best.
1. in the recap from the last chapter with the Alice POV of how people get over the novelty of her quickly. Aw.
2. The Dana being more touchy feely than usual. Yes! So spot-on. Dana is the less touchy-feely person whereas Alice IS more tactile. I loved that
3. “You gave that back to me” and that entire discussion on Dana’s childhood home lacking warmth and Alice’s insecurities about her ability to be a good mother.
There was more, and I’ll probably go back and comment more on that, but eh, this is it for now. And thanks for the comment in my journal!
Sulkygeek – thank you – and I so stole the Bette in dirty clothes from you – but I loved it and had to use it. Sorry!
I feel like I’m reading Alice’s journal right now…the way that way you portray Alice is perfect. Her words, thoughts, insecurities, strengths, actions–it’s absolutely Alice.
My favorite line is, “I wish you could see yourself through my eyes for just a minute. You’d never doubt yourself again.” I’ve always thought that to be true in life. Possibly the best portrayal of Danish–Showtime should hire you. Post soon!!
I love this story. I look forward to your updates. How I wish we would see something similar to this in S3 (never hurts to wish, even though the other writers have me liking the Helacious!). Thanks for giving us a version of Danish without the spoiler issues. Great writing.
you are the best fanfic writer of all time – please post soon. and drowning too. i am addicted to your stories.
I couldnt stay away any longer, I had to read this chapter! This story is so much fun, I love Alice’s thoughts. “She’s handy that way.” For some reason that one had me cracking up lol.
“dana doesn’t need any glasses.” No but you know she’d look hot in them. :P
You never disappoint me, ever in angs chapters. For my happiness this is not the case, beautiful. Thanks. And I agree people do dumb things a lot, but I need to believe in the humanity :P, that is called utopia and I know IC doesn’t know it, but for that exist the fanfiction.
Loved it, especially Dana’s speech at the end.
love the way you ended the chapter with alice accepting dana’s love and how dana is there just innocently loving her. dang insecurities. thanks for sharing the song too, it’s really nice. you’re doing great and this is one of the stories i really look forward to reading updates on. love it!
Wow, lucia, I thought you couldn’t better the last chapter, but you did! The way you write Alice’s POV is awesome, so apprehensive and cutting. It’s really well-observed and beautifully written. Thanks for posting.
beautiful