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Boundary Between Fear and Love – Chapter 5
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I throw myself down on the couch and shut my eyes, not to sleep mind you, just to relax a bit, it has been a ***** of a day. Way too much emotional Alice, not enough fun quirky Alice. I like fun quirky Alice way more.
I must have fallen asleep because the next thing I feel is Danas soft lips on my eyelids. I smile, keeping my eyes shut and some moan comes out of my mouth. There are times that I cannot believe the way the smallest action from her can elicit a response from me. Its totally unconscious. I surprise myself as much as her at the range of guttural noises she invokes from my body.
She sits down on the couch, moving my body slightly so that I am now laying on her, I thought you were asleep. I feel her fingers working their way through my hair.
I didnt mean to. I was just waiting. Im not sure that Im making sense, but she does take away my normally impeccable verbal communication skills. I wonder if that ever goes away. Im not sure if I want it to, but I do miss being more in control. I tend to like control.
Shes still playing with my hair as she answers me, Its ok, close your eyes if youre tired. Well just lay here. We can enjoy the quiet.
I lift my head slightly, I know, could you believe how crazy it was at Bette and Tinas. I never thought Id see the day that Bette Porters house was in total disarray!!
Shh, the quiet is nice, Al. I missed the quiet tonight. Why do you think I didnt say anything in the car?
I shrugged my shoulders, I just thought you were mesmerized by my absolute beauty. That wasnt it?
She starts to laugh, not exactly the reaction I was hoping for, but hey. You are absolutely beautiful. She leans in and kisses the top of my head, But Angelica, Bette and Tina, had me stunned into silence. It was funny watching Bette with stains on her clothes, wasnt it?
I playfully slap her arm, Youre horrible. We should feel bad that they are this over whelmed. Tina looks like she hasnt slept in days. And she really does. But, youre right, Bette having company in stained clothes was kind of funny. I start to snicker quietly, but it quickly grows into a full fledged laugh and Im having trouble breathing, Im laughing too hard.
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I know I already told you this but it can’t be said enough. Nobody writes Alice better than you, I would gladly take your version of Danish over the one on TV. You have just made my day.
There was a lot that I liked about this chapter, but I’m just going to comment on the three I loved best.
1. in the recap from the last chapter with the Alice POV of how people get over the novelty of her quickly. Aw.
2. The Dana being more touchy feely than usual. Yes! So spot-on. Dana is the less touchy-feely person whereas Alice IS more tactile. I loved that
3. “You gave that back to me” and that entire discussion on Dana’s childhood home lacking warmth and Alice’s insecurities about her ability to be a good mother.
There was more, and I’ll probably go back and comment more on that, but eh, this is it for now. And thanks for the comment in my journal!
Sulkygeek – thank you – and I so stole the Bette in dirty clothes from you – but I loved it and had to use it. Sorry!
I feel like I’m reading Alice’s journal right now…the way that way you portray Alice is perfect. Her words, thoughts, insecurities, strengths, actions–it’s absolutely Alice.
My favorite line is, “I wish you could see yourself through my eyes for just a minute. You’d never doubt yourself again.” I’ve always thought that to be true in life. Possibly the best portrayal of Danish–Showtime should hire you. Post soon!!
I love this story. I look forward to your updates. How I wish we would see something similar to this in S3 (never hurts to wish, even though the other writers have me liking the Helacious!). Thanks for giving us a version of Danish without the spoiler issues. Great writing.
you are the best fanfic writer of all time – please post soon. and drowning too. i am addicted to your stories.
I couldnt stay away any longer, I had to read this chapter! This story is so much fun, I love Alice’s thoughts. “She’s handy that way.” For some reason that one had me cracking up lol.
“dana doesn’t need any glasses.” No but you know she’d look hot in them. :P
You never disappoint me, ever in angs chapters. For my happiness this is not the case, beautiful. Thanks. And I agree people do dumb things a lot, but I need to believe in the humanity :P, that is called utopia and I know IC doesn’t know it, but for that exist the fanfiction.
Loved it, especially Dana’s speech at the end.
love the way you ended the chapter with alice accepting dana’s love and how dana is there just innocently loving her. dang insecurities. thanks for sharing the song too, it’s really nice. you’re doing great and this is one of the stories i really look forward to reading updates on. love it!
Wow, lucia, I thought you couldn’t better the last chapter, but you did! The way you write Alice’s POV is awesome, so apprehensive and cutting. It’s really well-observed and beautifully written. Thanks for posting.
beautiful