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    Breathe- Chapter 4

    Story written on July 18, 2005 by Sox1.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55490
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    Yea..formatting fixed: Bette takes Tina home

    Wow, Tina said. A BMW, a home on Lake Washingtonjust what kind of a detective are you? She asked as she used every ounce of strength remaining to color her words with a little playfulness.

    Well not the on the take kind if that is what youre implying, Bette responded in a more relaxed tone, relieved that Tina was talking.

    Shock had rendered Tinas social filter useless so without hesitating she asked, How exactly do you afford a place like this?

    Bette smiled again, That is a long story, Tina. And one that I would be more than happy to share with you after we get you showered and changed.

    Tina reached up with slightly shaking fingers and gently traced Bettes lips with her forefinger. Without thinking or hesitating Bette leaned into to her touch. You have a beautiful smile, Tina said quietly.

    As Bettes words regarding her clothes finally sunk in, the brief brightness in Tinas eyes faded as she looked down at her blood-soaked garments, the memories of the day coming back. Words once again left her and she simply nodded.

    Having taken Tina with her to gather towels and a robe, Bette now stood awkwardly in front of Tina as she struggled with the best way to preserve her clothing for analysis.

    Tina, I would have normally done this at theat your apartment, she finally started. Weve already allowed some cross-contamination, but we need to keep it to a minimum and salvage what we can. Bette studied Tinas eyes looking for understanding. Do you want me to help you? Bette finally asked.

    In response, Tina lifted her arms above her head and Bette slowly gathered the bottom of the fabric. The blood was still damp, making the material stick to the latex of Bettes gloves. To preserve any fibers or other trace evidence, Bette rolled the shirt as she brought it up and over Tinas head. She carefully placed the garment in an evidence bag and set it aside.

    She repeated the same process with Tinas pants, rolling them as she brought them down to the young womans ankles. Bettes breath caught as she felt Tinas hand brush her hair and lean on her shoulder to provide balance as she lifted one foot and then the other. Bette knew her face was flushed when she returned to her full height, hoping Tina either overlooked it or assumed it was due to Bettes leaning down.

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    11. What an amazing style you have… So carefully detailed and subtle…
      I’m simply savoring your story more and more, with its such palpable touch of delicacy…
      All my sincere reader’s gratefulness !

    14. Sox,
      Awesome!
      To have a talent is a wondrous thing but to share it with so many is truly beautiful gift.
      You have captivated me with this fabulous fantasy.
      Can’t wait to see where this leads next.
      Much anticipation for your next installment.
      A Loyal Fan.

    18. Sox girl – you got it going here. Absolutely outstanding. I know you from TWOP too (bfan) and have been missing you there but this story is so so good please keep going.

    19. love this story . it is so engrossing and so well written. I could almost feel the pain, the tension, the possibilities … can’t wait for the next episode.

    23. You are only on chapter four, and already my breath catches when I see that you have posted…I’m telling you, I love this story!!! Oh, and I also can’t wait to hear how a detective can afford to live on Lake Washington and drive a BMW!! PS Try emailing support@l-word.com for the formatting problem. Thanks again for this wonderful story.

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