LesFan

Lesbian Fan Social Network

    Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of PG. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, October 15, 2026

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    Breathe- Chapter 4

    Story written on July 18, 2005 by Sox1.
     Login to add story to favorites
     Login to add author to favorites
    62 votes, average: 3.77 out of 562 votes, average: 3.77 out of 562 votes, average: 3.77 out of 562 votes, average: 3.77 out of 562 votes, average: 3.77 out of 5 (62 votes, average: 3.77 out of 5)
    You need to be a registered member to rate this post.     Loading ... Loading ...
    Genre(s):
    Rating:
    fanfiction(s):
    Character(s): ,
    Number of Comments: 27
    Words: 1887
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55490
    Author Notes:

    Yea..formatting fixed: Bette takes Tina home

    Bette tried to remain singularly focused on the task at hand when her mind couldnt help but register the beauty and softness of Tinas skin. Bette took a deep breath and sighed as she picked up one of the towels. We need your bra and panties too, she said, hoping she didnt sound as uncomfortable as she felt. Do you want me to turn my back, or hold up a towel?

    Tina suddenly looked even more exhausted than she had before, and her eyes pleaded with Bette to just lead her through what needed to be done. Bette nodded in understanding and reached around Tina to unclasp her bra. As she did, Tina leaned her forehead into Bettes collarbone and just rested, drawing strength from Bettes mere presence near her.

    Keeping Tina close with a soft hand in the middle of her back, Bette slid her latex-clad fingers around the waistband of Tina’s underwear and let them drop to the floor. Even though they were pressed together, Bette didnt feel as if she were unduly violating Tinas privacy because her eyes could only find the top of the blondes head.

    She placed her lips softly on the crest of Tinas forehead and just held her, hoping that her comfort and strength was passing from one to the other.

    Bette felt Tina relax into her arms and she feared the young woman would let shock take her yet again. Bette reached for an oversized towel and wrapping Tina in it reached behind her to turn on the shower.

    The sudden noise of the shower spray made Tina startle and Bette pulled her close again, Your fine Tina, its just the shower. Here let me help you. Bette took her hand and helped Tina through the glass door of the large walk-in shower. Tina looked at Bette as if to ask a question, and then hesitated as if words were hidden and she was unable to find them.

    But Bette didnt need her words to know what Tina was thinking. Were done gathering evidence. You can just wash it all away. Bette said as she withdrew her hands and towel from Tina and began to close the door.

    Page 3 of 41234
    «
    FF Main Page
    »

    Comments

    11. What an amazing style you have… So carefully detailed and subtle…
      I’m simply savoring your story more and more, with its such palpable touch of delicacy…
      All my sincere reader’s gratefulness !

    14. Sox,
      Awesome!
      To have a talent is a wondrous thing but to share it with so many is truly beautiful gift.
      You have captivated me with this fabulous fantasy.
      Can’t wait to see where this leads next.
      Much anticipation for your next installment.
      A Loyal Fan.

    18. Sox girl – you got it going here. Absolutely outstanding. I know you from TWOP too (bfan) and have been missing you there but this story is so so good please keep going.

    19. love this story . it is so engrossing and so well written. I could almost feel the pain, the tension, the possibilities … can’t wait for the next episode.

    23. You are only on chapter four, and already my breath catches when I see that you have posted…I’m telling you, I love this story!!! Oh, and I also can’t wait to hear how a detective can afford to live on Lake Washington and drive a BMW!! PS Try emailing support@l-word.com for the formatting problem. Thanks again for this wonderful story.

    Leave a Reply