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    Breathe- Chapter 7

    Story written on July 21, 2005 by Sox1.
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    The trouble with hospitals is you have all that time on your hands waiting for test results!

    Tina finally let her exhaustion pull her head back to the pillow. Then I guess I am in very good hands and I will just have to trust that you know why I need to be here.

    Tinas trust brought a smile that spread to Bettes eyes and soon lit her entire face. She rubbed Tinas shoulder where her hand had been resting and without breaking her gaze said, Try to get some rest. I am going to talk to Stacey outside for a minute.

    Suddenly realizing she hadnt been alone since this morning, a burst of panic caused Tina to clutch Bettes hand between her own. Bette, dont leave me, she said, tears once again evident in her voice.

    Bette turned back towards Tina and sensing her panic asked Stacey, will you give us just a minute?

    Sure, Stacey nodded. But, I have the lab on alert, so Id like to get the blood drawn as soon as possible, she said looking between the two women trying to make sense of their obvious bond. Do you mind if I send in a nurse and then you can both just wait here for the results?

    Bette remained still making sure Tina knew the decision was hers. She whispered a quiet OK as she collapsed back into the pillow and closed her eyes, keeping Bettes hand tightly clasped between her own.

    Never taking her hand from Tinas, Bette pulled up a chair and sat next to the bed. After the nurse had left with the blood draw, Tina seemed to relax, letting the tension finally leave her tired muscles. Bette stood and leaned over the bed looking directly into Tinas eyes and lightly stroked her forehead trying to smooth her furrowed brow.

    After a comfortable silence Bette said You dont know how relieved I am to finally be able to tell you that today has officially become yesterday, a part of your past. She held up her watch for Tina to see the face which clearly indicated that it was 12:05 a.m.

    Part of my past, Tina repeated. Is something like that ever part of your past? I already feel like I have lived with it for years. It feels like it has crept into my heart and bones and will forever be part of who I am.

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    1. Sox,
      Absolutely awe inspiring!
      The little details that you capture so well have made this a breath taking story. The elements of attraction have been selectively and seductively sneaked in. I am wearing a big cheesy and goofy grin at Tina’s declaration “But, I’m not gay.” I think she has denial, big time.
      The way this story has developed with Bette potentially charging over the line just proves how much the heart can rule the head. And how when a chance at happiness comes your way you just have to grab it with both hands, hang on for dear life and be damned of the consequences. Usually there are many but if you are with your soul mate then any storm can be weathered.
      I am sitting in purgatory, waiting for Bette’s response and the test results. Will Bette tell Tina that she was the intended victim? What is the murderer’s motive?
      Given your talent and hard work, I am sure that these will be answered real soon.
      Thank you for this tour de force.
      Your Loyal Fan.

    2. My mind has been working overti8me.was someone after Tina or her room mate? Why Tinas picture,was it a warning or what. I will wait for the next chapter. Thanks

    4. I guess I was the only one who knew she was str8, ok so I only thought that because she asked to be kissed, she sounded unsure of her self. so she has no family, but I think the foster care is the perfect set up for shane to come into your story. can’t wait to see what bette does not. and to find out what she was drugged with and what form was used.

    6. soxey – I’m lovin’ the story.. well done! I’m a sucker for the “you’re the first woman I’ve kissed” Can’t wait to see where you’re taking them. -clammy

    10. “I’m not gay” My ass your not gay Tina, Bette would turn the straightest girl gay. I hope things start to work out and that Bette will find the basterd!!!!!!!!!!! Please post soon.

    11. Sox1,

      you are now officially in my favorite authors list…please keep it coming! i love your story so much…10 bright stars for you my friend!

    12. I think this is my first time commenting on your story. I just wanted to let you know that your story has really captured my attention. The idea is great and you do an excellent job of writing .. I am looking forward to see where you take us with this one.

    14. oh my god, soxy, that little I’m not gay revelation was such a surprize within your story here. You are amazing me and this story is so fine, Write on but do sleep and don’t let the bedbugs bite.

    17. Well, I had a whole theory in my mind, but with Tina’s revelation… it kinda falls apart, lol.
      Anyway, great chapter, but please, please, don’t turn it into a love story, keep the mystery coming too :)
      But I know you’ll find a way to juggle with the two just fine ;)
      xxx

    19. i’m on my way to work also. but had to comment. i waited all day yesterday hoping against hope that you’d post. this morning my wish fulfilled. love the dialogue. i’m a detail kinda girl and you give it in spades. love the background, finally, on tina. my ass shes not straight. loved their bonding moments. please post soon. wow mr. sox better appreciate your considerable talents.

    24. Tell Mr. Sox that he can’t kick you off the computer…your fans await your next installment. Better yet let me send over one of my extra laptops. That way you can write anywhere. I simply love this story.

    25. Great story. I like how your moving it along just enough without rushing it. I know Bette will get the guy, cos she’s gotta save Tina. Tina well, girl its too late now your on your way over to the other side. Looking forward to the next update.

    28. To me it seems perfectly reasonable that Tina has never kissed a woman before. The trauma that she has gone through and the fact that Bette has been her life line has to affect her feelings for the brunette. I am not saying that they wouldn’t have gotten together in other circumstance, but I think Tina’s willingness to be so open with Bette is because she has been so shockingly reminded how fragile life is. That’s my take, and Sox I am like a broken record, your skill is amazing.

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