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Broken Voyagers
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Bette searched her photographic memory and vaguely remembered seeing the woman Tina was referring to.
”Hmmmm… I can’t say for sure but I did catch a glimpse of an ’Audrey Hepburn’ type, you know ’Breakfast at Tiffany’s ’ Audrey… Pearls, long back gloves, sunglasses… she wasn’t alone. Some massive burly guy was standing next to her holding her umbrella…”
“Yes, that’s her. Do you know who she is?” Tina asked
”Not in the slightest…” Bette replied rising back to a sitting position to drink her tea. She cradled the mug, blowing on it carefully before taking a warming sip. ”Why do you ask?”
”She … and her companion left without acknowledging you… I found that very bizarre…is all.”
Putting her mug back down on the coffee table, Bette continued, ”Maybe you are reading too much into it baby, not everyone is comfortab…”
Bette’s words were interrupted by the sound of the front door bell.
Both their head turned at the same time, eyeing the front door just a few feet away.
”Are you expecting anyone?” Tina asked evidently puzzled by who their visitor could be.
Across the room, the dull buzzing sounded once more.
”I’ll get it.” Tina said rising quickly from her spot on the sofa.
She was surprised when she opened the door to see a UPS delivery man standing at the door.
”There is a package for Ms Porter.” A man wearing shorts announced.
Tina glanced back at Bette, who had risen from the sofa when she heard the delivery was for her.
”It’s quite heavy,” the UPS driver said nodding toward a large enough parcel sitting a standard issue trolley, ”Want me to bring it in for you?”
Tina stepped aside and pointed to a spot near the door to leave the cumbersome delivery.
”Here will be fine.” Tina indicated
”I’m going to need a signature from Ms Porter.” The UPS employee then said his gaze switching from Bette to Tina in turn unsure of who was who.
Bette stepped forward, taking hold of the small hand-held computer to sign the print smudged digital screen, thanking the man and shutting the door behind him.
Once alone, the two women looked at each other.
”Must be getting warm out…” They both said perfectly in unison before getting a sudden uncontrolled fit of the giggles.
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Hi! You one of my favourite writers and i very glad and happy that you returned and finished this amazing story! Thank you very much!
After i reading i leave another comment which will be more about story plot.
Wow Kins this takes care of my weekend reading!
Will comment again when I’ve read it.
Thanks in advance for posting.
SG
So glad you finished this story! Thank you for sticking it out and giving us this story. Loved it
Hi Kins,
So glad to see this story! It will take some time to read it and i will leave a comment after i finish.
Hi, welcom back, Kins!
Thank you for finished this story! Ok, now i’m going to read it.
Hi, Kins
Oh my God, Kins, welcome back, after almost 2 years, it’s been a long time, but reading the whole story now I feel, the wait was worth.
You have given us a quite wonderful and interesting story full of adventures and riddles and full of love of my favorite couple Bette and Tina.
You ended the story in a very good way, but I feel as if I want to know more about them, if Bette gets the funding for her project in Mexico, the wedding, their partnership, what Tina does for a job… and many more things.
I hope we could read more new beautiful stories from you; I like very much your style.
Thank you very much and please, post other TIBETTE stories
P
Ok, i read again this story, this time the whole and i’m ready to leave another comment.
First – thank you again for finish the story.
Second – happy to see happy final -treasure was found, bitch Kelly got lost. And i must say i like how you got rid from her – like in life we can say with 100% probability what happened – or she sank or she was killed by shark.
Third – i like how you described Bette and Tina and love between them. I like it in all your stories (maybe with one exception – in Frozen beginnings i don’t like your Bette during the story, but in final she corrected :) )
So, welcome back and maybe in the future we can see another great story from you? I really hope so.
Hi Kins,
Really enjoyed the read, thank you so much.
A great Story and I loved reading it in one post. As an English Lady I really enjoyed your explanation of Cricket!
I would love it if you would now consider a Sequel with these two characters.
Thanks again for posting.
SG
Welcom back, Kins!
I was a silent reader a long time, but after you finished this story i must register to say – “Thank you for fantastic story! And i hope this story won’t be your last on this site!”
Totaly agree with MissOne – i hope this story won’t be the last from you too!
Hi Kins,
You took us trough a incredible journey! Full of adventures, little clues i tried to catch to find the treasure, the background on the history of those ships and of course the love between Bette & Tina.
I really hope you will continu with a sequel or a new story.
Thank you so much for posting the whole story after two long years!
In-cre-di-ble! Kins, thank you so much for returning to this story and for giving us such a glorious and sweet ending. You’re such a talented writer. What a wonderful plot with astonishing details to the treasure hunt.
I second the previous comments and hope you’ll find the inspiration (and time) to work on a sequel. Maybe Bette’s project in Mexico with a twist with some unexpected traces of a legendary Aztec treasure ;)
Well ive read it at last.So pleased you managed to finish this story.I know how long it was in conception and all the research you did for its authenticity.
A great read.Loved the shark sequence.Found it quite thrilling.
Not as thrilling as the love scenes that you tell so well between Bette and Tina tho ????
Look forward to the next story that you will write for us.
Don’t make it too long a wait tho
C.x
Kins…!!! Yay! It’s really you!!
^_^
First, am so happy to see your name appear again! :) been so long!! So Glad to hear from you! hope all are fine for you and your love one!
Second, OMG…! The Long story at once!! Woohooo… such a great treat! THANKS!!
And third…. LOVE your story! This is so worthy! Appreciate your hard work in researching, plotting, writing and sharing this wonderful story! Your writing style is getting more interesting and fantastic! It’s Long pages but I just can’t stop reading it – well there’s a moment where I wanted to stop reading when that low creature kidnap her (ugh.. I don’t want to spoil the story).. it’s too much for me.. >.<
Again… thanks for sharing your talent here! :) if you ever consider to publish this, do update us here! ;-)
Take care always Kins! ^.^
Just finished reading. It was a fun read. Thanks for the adventure.
Wow!!!! Such rich detail that it feels so true ,.. as if you have near lived these experiences ur self. And along w the romance of it, I learned so much about ship wrecks and diving. Do post it on AO3 as well to get a broader audience… it belongs to stories worth sharing :)