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Broken Voyagers
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”Tell me something good.” The voice said.
”They have the parcel. UPS truck is just away.”
Chapter 3
A box of any type would always be a mysterious thing to any nine-year-old child, especially if that box was closed. One could never know what was inside. Was it a treasure? It certainly did look like a treasure chest; just like the one from her many pirate books, except that it did not have the same dome shaped lid. It was a simple rectangular shape. It looked antique meaning to Bette’s nine-year-old eyes that the box was old, very old, covered by a warm patina telling of its age as she would later learn, with marks and scuffs consistent with the life of what seemed to have been a very well used box.
It was very heavy too. The brass handles and inlaid brass corner pieces along with inlaid brass bands which extended the full surround of the box to provide maximum support and protection to the box carcass made up most of the weight. Just as impressive and adding to the bulk was the amount of fixings, little brass nails which held all the brassware securely.
Bette had counted them one day. There were exactly 240 of them.
There was a little lock on it too, one of those keyholes in a shape of a circle atop a rectangle with a width smaller than the diameter of the circle projecting from the bottom of the circle. The kind of keyhole which one could always associate with a round key.
Whatever was inside the box though, was kept safe. The box remained locked always.
Bette had forever wondered what was inside the box. She was drawn to it. It was sitting on the floor by her father’s desk in the home she was growing up.
Try as she might Bette was never able to open the box. She never found the key which fitted the lock. The child had so desperately wanted to unlock its secrets, to find out what it was guarding.
Often, at night, she would lie in bed and think about the box. Her father did not seem to pay a great deal of attention to it. She had seen him many times using it to prop up his feet when he read some complicated papers at his desk, reclining fully in his high-back leather chair, reading glasses perched on the end of his nose, shoes off and legs crossed at the ankles with his heels planted squarely on top of the box.
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Hi! You one of my favourite writers and i very glad and happy that you returned and finished this amazing story! Thank you very much!
After i reading i leave another comment which will be more about story plot.
Wow Kins this takes care of my weekend reading!
Will comment again when I’ve read it.
Thanks in advance for posting.
SG
So glad you finished this story! Thank you for sticking it out and giving us this story. Loved it
Hi Kins,
So glad to see this story! It will take some time to read it and i will leave a comment after i finish.
Hi, welcom back, Kins!
Thank you for finished this story! Ok, now i’m going to read it.
Hi, Kins
Oh my God, Kins, welcome back, after almost 2 years, it’s been a long time, but reading the whole story now I feel, the wait was worth.
You have given us a quite wonderful and interesting story full of adventures and riddles and full of love of my favorite couple Bette and Tina.
You ended the story in a very good way, but I feel as if I want to know more about them, if Bette gets the funding for her project in Mexico, the wedding, their partnership, what Tina does for a job… and many more things.
I hope we could read more new beautiful stories from you; I like very much your style.
Thank you very much and please, post other TIBETTE stories
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Ok, i read again this story, this time the whole and i’m ready to leave another comment.
First – thank you again for finish the story.
Second – happy to see happy final -treasure was found, bitch Kelly got lost. And i must say i like how you got rid from her – like in life we can say with 100% probability what happened – or she sank or she was killed by shark.
Third – i like how you described Bette and Tina and love between them. I like it in all your stories (maybe with one exception – in Frozen beginnings i don’t like your Bette during the story, but in final she corrected :) )
So, welcome back and maybe in the future we can see another great story from you? I really hope so.
Hi Kins,
Really enjoyed the read, thank you so much.
A great Story and I loved reading it in one post. As an English Lady I really enjoyed your explanation of Cricket!
I would love it if you would now consider a Sequel with these two characters.
Thanks again for posting.
SG
Welcom back, Kins!
I was a silent reader a long time, but after you finished this story i must register to say – “Thank you for fantastic story! And i hope this story won’t be your last on this site!”
Totaly agree with MissOne – i hope this story won’t be the last from you too!
Hi Kins,
You took us trough a incredible journey! Full of adventures, little clues i tried to catch to find the treasure, the background on the history of those ships and of course the love between Bette & Tina.
I really hope you will continu with a sequel or a new story.
Thank you so much for posting the whole story after two long years!
In-cre-di-ble! Kins, thank you so much for returning to this story and for giving us such a glorious and sweet ending. You’re such a talented writer. What a wonderful plot with astonishing details to the treasure hunt.
I second the previous comments and hope you’ll find the inspiration (and time) to work on a sequel. Maybe Bette’s project in Mexico with a twist with some unexpected traces of a legendary Aztec treasure ;)
Well ive read it at last.So pleased you managed to finish this story.I know how long it was in conception and all the research you did for its authenticity.
A great read.Loved the shark sequence.Found it quite thrilling.
Not as thrilling as the love scenes that you tell so well between Bette and Tina tho ????
Look forward to the next story that you will write for us.
Don’t make it too long a wait tho
C.x
Kins…!!! Yay! It’s really you!!
^_^
First, am so happy to see your name appear again! :) been so long!! So Glad to hear from you! hope all are fine for you and your love one!
Second, OMG…! The Long story at once!! Woohooo… such a great treat! THANKS!!
And third…. LOVE your story! This is so worthy! Appreciate your hard work in researching, plotting, writing and sharing this wonderful story! Your writing style is getting more interesting and fantastic! It’s Long pages but I just can’t stop reading it – well there’s a moment where I wanted to stop reading when that low creature kidnap her (ugh.. I don’t want to spoil the story).. it’s too much for me.. >.<
Again… thanks for sharing your talent here! :) if you ever consider to publish this, do update us here! ;-)
Take care always Kins! ^.^
Just finished reading. It was a fun read. Thanks for the adventure.
Wow!!!! Such rich detail that it feels so true ,.. as if you have near lived these experiences ur self. And along w the romance of it, I learned so much about ship wrecks and diving. Do post it on AO3 as well to get a broader audience… it belongs to stories worth sharing :)