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Can You Still Love Me? Ch 1
Bette grabbing hold of Tinas hands, forced them over her head, and backed her into the wall, when she did Shane was about to interfere when Alice held her arm out and shook her head no.
Al, shes going to hurt her more.
Alice knowing Bette so well, knew that despite Bettes recent actions, Bette would never or could ever hurt Tina more than what she already had done and would never continue to cause her pain.
Shane just dont.
Shane stepped back and closed her eyes because she couldnt take it, her own world of perfection was coming apart right in front of her.
Bette with Tinas hands defeated stood as close as she could and with the already familiar tears down both their faces,
I hurt you I know and its killing me. Im such an ***** and I dont deserve you but I need you, I want you, baby I love you and no matter what I have done nothing could ever change that. You are my heart, my life, and the one thing I need to live. I will do anything for you to just not shut me out. I want to fix it. I want to fix us.
Tina with all these thoughts running through her mind tried to get out of Bettes embrace but Bette only held on tighter.
No T, Im not letting you go, I cant.
But you let us go.
Tinas words hurt but she was right, because for that one small moment she did let go. But not of Tina, or the love she had for her, she let go of herself.
Baby I cant take it back but I would, I want to erase this and despite the ugly things I have done to you I have never let go of you, and especially of loving you. T, just tell me what you want, what you need.
Bette was afraid to ask that question because she knew she might be the one thing Tina did not need, but she had to if she wanted to try and fix this.
I want you to let go of my hands and leave.
Baby no,
Its what I want Bette.
Bette not wanting to but having to let go of her hands was something she could not handle, because then next she would have to let go of Tina completely. But before she released her hands she went for Tinas lips. Tina already tired and not strong enough for anything let her kiss her.
Both crying into their kiss and Bette whispering she loved her over and over before she let go of her lips, and then let go of her hands. She looked at Tina giving her what she wanted and turned around and walked towards the doors. But before Bette could open it, Tina called her and she started to turn towards her. When she stopped only to be facing her she did not see that Tina had her ring in her hand. So before she could ask anything, Tina chunked her ring at her hitting her hard in her chest.
Bette looked at Tina, then down at the ring and she knew she couldnt say anything, so as she picked it up, in trade, she left her heart on the floor. When she went to stand back up she turned so that way when she was on her feet again, she wasnt looking at Tina. This wasnt how she wanted to remember her, so she turned the ***** and walked out of the door and possibly out of her life and her heart.
As the front door closed, Tina slid down the bedroom door as the others came to surround her.
In Bettes car sitting there in the drivers seat, she opened her hand to all that she had left of her life with Tina, her ring. And as the spot to where the ring came into contact with her chest throbbed she touched it only to find that the ring she came to place on her wifes finger was now causing her chest to bleed.
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HOLY SHIT!! THIS WAS EXCELLENT!!
Damn! Now, that was intense and probably one of the few fics to have Bette come directly over and face Tina right after the blowup.
Intense and good.
Keep up the good work!
Really great start!
HOLY SHIT! IS RIGHT! 5-stars
WOW!! What a way to start. This was just EXCELLENT.
This is the way I would love to see season 2 start. I like the way you expalin their feelings. Send this to Eileen and tell her this is what we want ot see!!!!
Excellent beginning. Looking forward to more.
Wow is right. I think Tina needs to work on her temper. Why is it that when she was hurting Bette by holding onto her face real tight, and then hitting her in the face, no one tried to stop her, but when Bette grabbed Tina’s hands to protect herself, Shane wanted to come to the rescue? Throwing the ring may have made a good point, but it is never a good thing to throw something at someone and draw blood. The emotions were raw, the writing very good!
Nicely done. I like the way Bette went to find Tina – even if it didn’t turn out the way she intended.
The ring hitting her square in the chest was awesome!
Looking for ward to more.