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Can’t Be – 10 – Finale
Story written on September 21, 2005 by Dinky.
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“Al, I left Tonya.”
Oh *****! Oh *****! “Huh? What?” No way. No way.
Dana grabs a hold of Alice’s hand and leads her to the couch. “I did it. I left Tonya.” She looks at Alice so innocently, and nervously. Her stomach is churning w/ excitement and as she speaks, her voice shakes.
“Hey, what’s wrong? Tell me what happened.” Oh gosh, is she ok? She looks like she’s going to be sick. I’ve never seen her like this.
What the *****? Why am I so nervous all of a sudden? I had the guts to come here and talk to her finally, and all I could think of doing was kissing her. I just needed to. I needed to feel she was here and that I finally did the right thing. I followed my heart. “Ok, sorry, it all happened so fast. I’m still feeling the after effects of what just happened.”
“It’s ok, Dane. Take your time. Just start when you’re ready.” Wow. Must’ve been rough.
“Well, after leaving you at the club. I had this urge to leave Tonya. I mean, I tried the other night…”
“You did?” What does this mean? Oh *****.
“and she brushed me off. I got to thinking that maybe I don’t really love her, and I really don’t want to spend the rest of my life with her.”
Thank you! Whew! Without sounding too happy...”Oh really? Uh huh..”
“I’ve realized so many things this past week, and I analyzed myself, my relationship w/ Tonya, and my relationship with you.”
Oh no. Let this be good news. Please. “Uh… huh..”
“For myself, I thought about what would really make me happy, ya know? I mean, there’s my career, my family, my friends, Tonya and you. Career-wise, Tonya is great. She’s got me so many deals and she’s a really good manager. Family – they accepted her, and us going to get married and that was a plus. Friends, they support me in everything I do, even though I know I jumped into this relationship too quickly. You though, being the most supportive.” She smiles at Alice. It was an appreciative smile. Alice didn’t know what to make of this. She was still in the whole “just friends” mode and only hoped that the kiss and breakup meant more.
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That was absolutely amazing!! Fantastic i hope you are going to be writing more about my 2 favorite girls in the future
FANTASTICC!!! I love happy endings! Al and Dane for lifeeee
That was wonderful and I’m sad to see it end. I hope you’ll be able to write again soon though I understand how life can get in the way lol. Thank you for this fic, I really enjoyed it.
First!!!..’Im luvin it’ dat was a pretti chapter&aSWT stori all2gether..I LUVED it..I applaud your beautifulli written stori..cant wait till ur next pst..dun stop..need mre..PLEASE..Post so0N…
Great story! I absolutely loved it. Hopefully you’ll be able to write another in the future…we need more Danish writing :)
that was great so much love in this story about them I just hope that it ends like that on the show but I will have to wait and see please post soon
LOVED IT!!
Thank you. The story was very sweet, and got better and better as you went along. Are you going to start a new story or a continuation soon?
Thanks for all you positive comments. I really appreciate it. Ackemat, I’m not sure what the next one is going to be, but it’ll definitely be Danish. :) Thanks again, everyone.