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Can’t Be – 10 – Finale
Story written on September 21, 2005 by Dinky.
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“Are you nervous?” She’s actually nervous. Why? It’s only me.
Dana’s insides were churning. She felt so helpless. She felt a little overwhelmed. I could show her. She looked at Alice and Alice looked so worried and concerned. It calmed her a little, but her breathing started to get faster as she thought of what she had to do. She had to show her. She pulled her into an embrace. Alice hugged her back and felt a sense of relief. She’s ok. Dana’s hand started to caress Alice’s back. She smelled her neck and was drawn to Alice’s scent. She started to kiss her neck. Alice wanted this so bad. She didn’t want to stop this time. Instead she went with it. Dana pushed Alice gently down on the couch and straddled her. She looked down at Alice with the look. The same look Alice had their last night together. Alice looked up at her and smiled. She wasn’t about to stop this. Dana smiled and with the most seductive voice she said, “What do you want, Al?” She looked up at Dana, and pulled her down to her to whisper, “I want you, Dana.” Dana felt her body heat up and she slowly pulled away to look at Alice, but as Dana started to move, Alice’s tongue licked Dana’s earlobe and with a light bite, she grabbed her earlobe with her teeth and pulled her down gently, to suck on Dana’s neck. Just where she knew Dana would melt. Dana moaned, “Oh *****, Al” Her body started to respond and things were moving faster this time around.
Dana needed to feel Alice. She needed to feel her naked body against hers, and with that thought, she undressed Alice slowly, admiring Alice’s body. Alice blushed, which she couldn’t believe, and as she undressed Dana, she stared into her eyes with an urgent need. She grabbed Dana and kissed her hungrily. Dana felt Alice’s body against hers, and was in heaven. She couldn’t believe how good this felt. Dana loved the feel of Alice’s skin, so smooth and so warm. She wanted this forever. Nobody made her feel this way.
Alice loved Dana, and it turned her on to know that she was pleasing Dana. Nothing turned her on more than hearing Dana though. Dana was different this time. She was more vocal, and it was ***** as *****. Alice couldn’t believe it. And what got to her the most, was how she said her name each time. As Alice made her way kissing, sucking, and licking Dana’s body down to her core… “Oh Al… feels so good right there.” Dana was so wet that when Alice”s finally brought her fingers downward to feel her, Alice moaned into Dana’s ear… “Oh ***** Dana, you are so *****’ wet. Do I do this to you?” Dana was moaning, ”You have no idea what you do to me, Al.” Alice looked at Dana, and whispered, ”Do you know what you do to me?” With that, she took Dana’s hand down her body and Dana felt her. “*****, Alice. ***** me.” She looked into her eyes, and they simultaneously inserted their fingers into each other… just watching each other’s reactions. It was slow at first, and their tempo started to increase. Their breathing was getting fast and their bodies started rocking. “Uh.. uh.. ohh…gawd, Alice…” “Come on, Dane.. ***** for me.” Dana was the first to reach her *****, and it was extreme. Just seeing and feeling Dana release put Alice was enough for Alice. “Oh *****..oh fu… uh… uh… Dane….” They looked at one another, kissed each other softly and smiled. They embraced one another, and laid there enjoying the beautiful feeling and peace they brought to one another. With a calmness, they drifted off to sleep.
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That was absolutely amazing!! Fantastic i hope you are going to be writing more about my 2 favorite girls in the future
FANTASTICC!!! I love happy endings! Al and Dane for lifeeee
That was wonderful and I’m sad to see it end. I hope you’ll be able to write again soon though I understand how life can get in the way lol. Thank you for this fic, I really enjoyed it.
First!!!..’Im luvin it’ dat was a pretti chapter&aSWT stori all2gether..I LUVED it..I applaud your beautifulli written stori..cant wait till ur next pst..dun stop..need mre..PLEASE..Post so0N…
Great story! I absolutely loved it. Hopefully you’ll be able to write another in the future…we need more Danish writing :)
that was great so much love in this story about them I just hope that it ends like that on the show but I will have to wait and see please post soon
LOVED IT!!
Thank you. The story was very sweet, and got better and better as you went along. Are you going to start a new story or a continuation soon?
Thanks for all you positive comments. I really appreciate it. Ackemat, I’m not sure what the next one is going to be, but it’ll definitely be Danish. :) Thanks again, everyone.