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Can’t Be – 10 – Finale
Story written on September 21, 2005 by Dinky.
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Dana woke up and found Alice awake just looking at her.
God, she’s beautiful.
“Good morning” She moved in to give Alice a kiss. Alice smiled into the kiss loving the fact that she woke up w/ Dana next to her.
“Whatcha lookin’ at, Al?” Dana asked, teasingly.
“You are so beautiful, Dana. You really are.” And she meant it.
“So are you, Al.” Dana moved in for another loving kiss.
“You ok, Dane? I mean with Tonya and with this?”
Dana looked into Alice’s eyes… “You just don’t know.” Alice smiled shyly and just stared at Dana w/ so much love, and Dana could feel it. “You know, Al… the last time we were together. You whispered in my ear… do you remember?”
“Of course, Dane.” Alice was embarassed, and Dana found it so adorable.
“I felt it. I felt you, you know?” Now Dana became shy.
Everything felt so right and Alice let her fears go. She was risking everything by saying this, and she started to tear a little because she was going to put it all out there. I mean once you say it, it’s out there. You can’t really take it back. “Dane..” It was her turn. Her voice was at a whisper because if it were any louder, Dana would have heard her voice crack. It would definitely show how nervous she was.
“Yes, Al” Dana looked at her with the most innocent look, and it put Alice at ease a bit.
“You know how much you mean to me, right? I mean, you know that this, what’s happening between us is so good, but a little scary as well.”
“What are you afraid of, Al?” Don’t be afraid.
Alice looked down… she had to tell her how she felt. This was it. This was the time. She could only show her so much. “I’m afraid of losing you, Dane”
“Aw, hon, you’re not going to lose me. Please look at me.”
She looked up into Dana’s concerned and sincere eyes. “No, you don’t understand. You’re my best friend and I can’t even imagine what would become of me if I lost you. I could ***** this up, you know? Well, if I haven’t already.”
“No, no I do understand. Don’t you think I’m scared too? My whole life has changed because of you.”
“I know, Dane. I threw you a curve ball and I’m the cause of all of these changes. I’m so sorry.” So sorry.
“Al, stop it. This feel right to me. This feels good. I’ve never felt so good about any decision I’ve made lately. Well, except for coming out. Being with you feels right. Can’t you tell?” I love you so much.
“Really?” She hoped that Dana felt the same. “So, what does this all mean, Dana? You left Tonya, and now you’re here with me. Where do we go from here?” Here we go. I have to ask. I have to know.
She needs to know and it’s only right that I tell her now. “Al, I left Tonya to be with you. I’m here because I want to be with you.” She moved in closer, and kissed Alice softly. She looked into her eyes. “I love you so much, Alice. I’m in love with you.” She kissed Alice again. “You’re all I think about, and I don’t know what I would do if I couldn’t be with you. I need you, Alice. That last night.. I’ve never felt so much love. I felt that from you, and come to think of it, I’ve always felt that from you.” She smiled at that realization. She has. Alice really loved her.
Alice was in awe. She couldn’t believe that Dana was telling her all of this. She was speechless, and all she could do was smile, and tears started falling slowly. She wasn’t sad this time. She was so touched. She was happy. Dana loved her. Alice kissed her and wanted so much to show her again, but first she had to tell her. “I love you, Dana. I love you with all of my heart.” Dana smiled because she truly believed it. Everything felt so right. “And I love you, Alice.”
The end.
Thanks for reading everyone.
The end.
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That was absolutely amazing!! Fantastic i hope you are going to be writing more about my 2 favorite girls in the future
FANTASTICC!!! I love happy endings! Al and Dane for lifeeee
That was wonderful and I’m sad to see it end. I hope you’ll be able to write again soon though I understand how life can get in the way lol. Thank you for this fic, I really enjoyed it.
First!!!..’Im luvin it’ dat was a pretti chapter&aSWT stori all2gether..I LUVED it..I applaud your beautifulli written stori..cant wait till ur next pst..dun stop..need mre..PLEASE..Post so0N…
Great story! I absolutely loved it. Hopefully you’ll be able to write another in the future…we need more Danish writing :)
that was great so much love in this story about them I just hope that it ends like that on the show but I will have to wait and see please post soon
LOVED IT!!
Thank you. The story was very sweet, and got better and better as you went along. Are you going to start a new story or a continuation soon?
Thanks for all you positive comments. I really appreciate it. Ackemat, I’m not sure what the next one is going to be, but it’ll definitely be Danish. :) Thanks again, everyone.