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Can’t Be – 10 – Finale
Story written on September 21, 2005 by Dinky.
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Supportive, right. Show up at her doorstep at 4am and kiss her. “But, Dana I was the worst friend ever. I mean, I wasn’t that supportive, I’m the one who told you that you couldn’t marry her. I kissed you and I made you cheat on her, Dana.” Her mind was going… she had to blame herself for this whole thing. She wasn’t supportive at all. She felt guilty, and she had to let it out.
Dana was a little shocked. Wasn’t Alice happy? She finally left Tonya. Doesn’t she get what just happened? “Al, you’re the best friend ever. You showed me that I was going to make the biggest mistake of my life. Don’t you see that?”
“Yes, but how do you feel, Dane? Um, how do you feel about me?” *****. I had to ask. I have to know. This is gonna make it or break it. *****. Maybe it’s too soon. She just broke up w/ Tonya. Dammit Al!
“Uh…” Oh *****. I love you. *****.
“Stop. No, don’t. I don’t want to put you on the spot right now. You just broke up w/ Tonya. I’m here for you and I’m sorry for asking. Please tell me more.”
“Al, you can ask me anything. Don’t you know that? I don’t want to talk about Tonya. I’m here because I need to talk to you.”
“Yeah, but it was selfish of me to ask. I’m really sorry.” Alice felt like *****. She felt she was the cause of all this and that Dana needed her to be her friend right now.
“Can you tell me how you feel? I left Tonya, does that mean anything to you?”
“That’s great, Dana. If that’s what you really want.” I’m an idiot. Why can’t I just be happy?
“I thought that’s what you wanted.” Isn’t it?
“It is, but why did you do it Dana?” Please tell me. I need to know.
Dana was nervous as *****. Why couldn’t she just say it? “Because…”
Dejavu… “Are you ok? You’re shaking.” She grabs Dana’s hands and looks into her eyes.
“I.. I.. am not” *****. I am. What’s wrong w/ me?
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That was absolutely amazing!! Fantastic i hope you are going to be writing more about my 2 favorite girls in the future
FANTASTICC!!! I love happy endings! Al and Dane for lifeeee
That was wonderful and I’m sad to see it end. I hope you’ll be able to write again soon though I understand how life can get in the way lol. Thank you for this fic, I really enjoyed it.
First!!!..’Im luvin it’ dat was a pretti chapter&aSWT stori all2gether..I LUVED it..I applaud your beautifulli written stori..cant wait till ur next pst..dun stop..need mre..PLEASE..Post so0N…
Great story! I absolutely loved it. Hopefully you’ll be able to write another in the future…we need more Danish writing :)
that was great so much love in this story about them I just hope that it ends like that on the show but I will have to wait and see please post soon
LOVED IT!!
Thank you. The story was very sweet, and got better and better as you went along. Are you going to start a new story or a continuation soon?
Thanks for all you positive comments. I really appreciate it. Ackemat, I’m not sure what the next one is going to be, but it’ll definitely be Danish. :) Thanks again, everyone.