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Can’t Be – 7
Story written on September 10, 2005 by Dinky.
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“So what are you saying? It was a mistake, right?” I don’t want to hear it. Please don’t…
“No, not at all. I don’t know. I’m sorry. This is really hard for me.”
“I can make it really easy for you. Dana, it was a mistake. I’m sorry I kissed you and made you cheat on your fiance. It was just an attraction and now it’s over. You go marry Tonya, and I’ll be fine because it was just an attraction. Now, we’ve felt what it was like to be together, and we move on.”
“Why are you saying this? It’s not true.”
“What was it Dana? Are you going to leave Tonya for me? I’m such a ***** up. I don’t do well in relationships. I’m so bad that I made you cheat, Dana. I started it, and look how far it’s gone. You were doing fine until I showed up on your doorstep.”
“So, it’s just an attraction? That’s how you really feel, Al? Because, that’s not what I felt. I felt something totally different.”
“Just stop it, Dane. We can’t be together. Don’t you get it? We’re best friends, we crossed the line, and now look… we’re fucked up. We don’t know how to handle it. We crossed the line and now we have to deal with reality. The reality is that you’re still marrying Tonya.”
“But, Al…”
“No, nothing can happen between us unless you leave her. Do you understand that? I can’t be the other girl. I can’t be second best. I’ll settle for being your best friend. At least, that I know I’m first.”
“I’m sorry, Al. I can’t do this right now. I’m so confused. I don’t know what to do and now things are not right between us. It hurts to see you like this.”
“I’ll be fine Dana. Just know that. Thank you for coming by. I really appreciate it.”
“Al…”
“Yeah…”
“You gonna be ok?”
“Yeah…”
Dana goes to hug Alice and they embrace one another and can’t let go. Dana is hugging Alice with all that she has, and Alice fakes it at first, but once she felt Dana against her, she sunk in to the embrace and just wanted to melt. She felt so good. Dana felt even worst. She felt the guilt of making Alice feel this way, and for still being with Tonya. Alice started to cry, and Dana felt her tears. She couldn’t control it, but she didn’t care. This was the most vulnerable that Dana was ever going to see her. She promised herself that right at this moment. Dana’s heart was breaking. She could feel the sadness between them. She wanted it to go away. She wanted to make Alice’s pain go away. So, she pulled away, and looked into Alice’s eyes.
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Dinky I haven’t ever read you stories before, and I have only read this one chapter. But let me tell you, you just make it to my favorite authors list. Good story, great writing. Maybe you should include the word Danish in your summary, so all the Danish fans can find your work. A lot of times we don’t notice unless you say something in your title or summary, and there is so much tibette out there good writer like you get lost in crowd.
Very nice twist on things! I look very
forward to your next chapter.
Don’t know why your rating is so low this story is good. I have faith in Dana she’ll come around!5 Stars
I agree with outside3230 that dana will come around and pick alice because she is so in love with her please post soon
I like the turn you give to the story. Now I’m waiting for what will happen. Great chapter, please post soon