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Can’t Be – 7
Story written on September 10, 2005 by Dinky.
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How fricken ***** is she? *****.
Dana could only come up with…”yes…” she was so damn lost. What was Alice doing to her? She was getting so emotional. What was happening? This wasn’t *****. This wasn’t the passion she felt the other night. This was so much more meaningful and she got it. She got what Alice was doing, and it touched her. Her tears started to fall more now. Alice knew her message was getting to Dana, but she didn’t stop to comfort her, she didn’t ask what was wrong, she just continued to make love to Dana, slowly and with all the love she’s ever felt for anyone. Even when it came to the point where Dana was at her peak, Alice was looking at her, watching her intensely with pure love in her eyes. No lust, but pure love. It was the most amazing experience for both of them. Dana started sobbing and turned away. She couldn’t control everything she was feeling inside. Alice held her and comforted her until her crying subsided. She was holding her like she never wanted to let go. As Dana calmed down, she turned to look at Alice and caressed her face. It was as if she was in another world. Everything seemed so right, yet so wrong because she was still with Tonya. She tried to tell Alice that she was sorry, sorry for putting her through this because she knew it was hurting her. But, nothing came out. She couldn’t say anything. She just wanted to stay there and stare at her forever. Alice was trying to figure out what Dana was thinking. As she looked into her eyes, she could see that Dana was having a hard time. She seemed like she wanted to say something. Alice was dreading what Dana was going to say, so she tried to beat her to it. In her softest most caring voice… “Don’t worry hon, I’m going to be ok”. Which, she really wasn’t. This was killing her, but there was nothing she could do. Dana just melted.
How the ***** did she know? I just want her to be ok. Ok, until I get my ***** together. I can’t let this go. I’ve never felt like this before, and I have to make things right. But, I feel I have no right to ask her to wait. I don’t even know what I’m going to say to Tonya. I don’t even know where this is going to take us. Why can’t I say anything? Why is this so hard? I just want to tell her I love her. But, nothing is coming out. “Al…”
“No, Dana, it’s ok. I promise that I’ll back off.”
No… no, that’s not what I want. *****. But, it’s not right. “Al, I’m so confused.” *****.
“Don’t worry, everything will be ok.”
“But you don’t understand.”
“Yes, I do and I am so sorry. Sorry for putting you through this. I don’t want you to marry Tonya, but if it’s what you really want, then I can’t get in your way.”
“No, no.”
“Yes, Dana. It wasn’t right for me to mess up your plans. I couldn’t help it though. I was being selfish because she was taking you away from me. We weren’t spending time w/ each other anymore, and I missed you and…”
“And?”
“and I’m sorry.”
“No, you don’t have to apologize. Things happen. I think we’ve always been attracted to each other. How can we not? Well, at least I’ve always been attracted to you, but never thought anything would happen, so I just didn’t think anymore of it. But, when you kissed me, it all made sense.”
“What?”
“That we’re attracted to each other. You know, more than friends.”
***** Dana. Who knew? “So, you’re with Tonya, we’re best friends… we can’t be… I mean, we shouldn’t…” and with the most hesitation in the world… “so, just friends?”
*****. *****. “Just friends”
And with that they embraced each other one last time, and Dana got ready to go. Still in a daze over what happened, they both were in their own world wondering if what they did was the right thing. Dana left and got into her Subaru and started crying again. Did she do the right thing? As for Alice, she curled up in her bed, held her pillow and cried until she was exhausted and finally went to sleep.
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Dinky I haven’t ever read you stories before, and I have only read this one chapter. But let me tell you, you just make it to my favorite authors list. Good story, great writing. Maybe you should include the word Danish in your summary, so all the Danish fans can find your work. A lot of times we don’t notice unless you say something in your title or summary, and there is so much tibette out there good writer like you get lost in crowd.
Very nice twist on things! I look very
forward to your next chapter.
Don’t know why your rating is so low this story is good. I have faith in Dana she’ll come around!5 Stars
I agree with outside3230 that dana will come around and pick alice because she is so in love with her please post soon
I like the turn you give to the story. Now I’m waiting for what will happen. Great chapter, please post soon