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Can’t Be – 7
Story written on September 10, 2005 by Dinky.
“Al…”
Alice looked up and into Dana’s eyes. She didn’t want to hear that they were just friends. She didn’t want to be comforted. She didn’t want Dana’s pity. One more night. Make this it. I love her so much, and she’s right here. Dana couldn’t believe how beautiful Alice was. Although she had been crying, she looked so beautiful looking at her, and Dana just wanted her. She wanted to tell her that she wanted to be with her. She wanted to comfort her and ask her to wait, so they could do this right. But, nothing came out. She got lost in Alice’s eyes. It was almost as if they were already speaking to each other.
Their faces so close. Their stare so intense. Alice licked her lips as she stared at Dana, and Dana bit her lip knowing what Alice wanted. She wanted it too. Their stare became more intense and slowly, Alice pulled Dana towards her and their lips met for a slow kiss. For Alice, well, she wanted this to be the one. She didn’t know what was in store for them, but she wanted Dana to feel everything that she felt. She kissed Dana gently, savoring this moment. For her, this may be the last time. Dana is still with Tonya. She may not even leave her.
I don’t want this to end. Please forgive me Dana, but I can’t help it. Oh my gosh. I’m so lost right now. This feels so right.
Dana returns Alice’s kisses and feels like she’s floating. She doesn’t want to stop. She savors Alice’s kisses because she’s never been kissed like this before. She feels so loved, so wanted, so cared for and all this through the kisses. Alice wanted to give her all that she had, and although they were only kisses, she tried to make it the most memorable. Hoping maybe Dana would always want it. Hoping that if she gave it her all, Dana would never forget it. Her hands slowly caressed Dana’s face, as she continued her gentle kisses. Dana was just taking it all in. She wanted this so bad and it was killing her that she couldn’t stop. She felt so torn, she was cheating on Tonya, but she couldn’t stop it. She wanted Alice. She loved Alice and there was no turning back now. How could she ever think of NOT kissing her again? How could she NOT want to touch her and hold her and just be with her? Tears started to fall from her eyes as she kissed Alice. Alice felt them, but still didn’t stop. She too was already emotional, but for her it was because this may be the last time she could show Dana what she really felt. For Dana, she was feeling Alice’s love. She returned the kisses and caresses, and slowly they explored each other’s bodies. It was as if everything was in slow motion. No words, they spoke only with their touch. Then Alice broke away from kissing her mouth, to looking deep into her eyes, to slowly licking her neck and working her way to whispering into her ear “Can you feel it?”, to nibbling on her earlobe, down to her neck, and working her way to the other ear and whispering “Can you feel me?”. Dana was gonna burst.
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(41 votes, average: 3.85 out of 5)
Dinky I haven’t ever read you stories before, and I have only read this one chapter. But let me tell you, you just make it to my favorite authors list. Good story, great writing. Maybe you should include the word Danish in your summary, so all the Danish fans can find your work. A lot of times we don’t notice unless you say something in your title or summary, and there is so much tibette out there good writer like you get lost in crowd.
Very nice twist on things! I look very
forward to your next chapter.
Don’t know why your rating is so low this story is good. I have faith in Dana she’ll come around!5 Stars
I agree with outside3230 that dana will come around and pick alice because she is so in love with her please post soon
I like the turn you give to the story. Now I’m waiting for what will happen. Great chapter, please post soon