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Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 31
At this point Jess was yelling.
Jess: Wasnt it??
Bette: yes.
Jess: I told her that I loved her. I loved her so much that I agreed to stay hidden in the shadows so as not to disrupt her perfect shot at fame. Well one night I went to Bettes apartment as planned for dinner. I let myself in with the key she had given me and found not Bette, but a note. A ***** note! She said she wasnt ready and she was sorry. Sorry! Thats all you could say was ***** sorry. She disappeared for a while leaving me no way to contact her. The next thing I new Bette was a bright rising star on the great white way and I was nothing to her. I even stood outside the theatre one night hoping to just catch your eye. I thought if you saw me then youd remember how you felt. You just walked by me! Like I was invisible. But I guess I was invisible. All youve ever been able to see was your stupid ***** career! Well I wasnt going to let that happen to Tina. I heard about the two of you and I made it my mission to make sure she wouldnt get burned by you.
Tina sat shaking on the bed, Jess crying in the corner and Bette cowering in the shadows. This was not at all how this night was supposed to go.
Bette: Im gonna go.
Bettes voice was shaky with tears.
Tina: Wait.
Bette turned but not before wiping her eyes.
Tina: Bette, I dont know what happened between the two of you. And Jess Im sorry she hurt you. Really I am. But Bette, youre here. You came here tonight.
Bette: I wasnt going to.
Jess: You were gonna run like you always do.
Bette: You have no idea what I was going to do Jess so shut up.
Jess sat down on the bed. Tina had been standing and was now walking toward Bette.
Tina: Why did you come here Bette? I need you to be honest. Were you coming to say goodbye?
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(54 votes, average: 3.56 out of 5)
Okay I’m gonna follow you, cos I love this story, and you and keep it moving as long as nothing bad happens to either Bette or Tina.
I’m following a Moonshadow
Moonshadow, Moonshadow…
Dea Ex Machina!!!!
And not a moment too soon!!!!!
Good chapter. I’m happy for Bette and Tina. Ok let see the twist that you got. Please post soon, thanks!
Did not see the twist with jess coming is she gone for good. I knew bette would show up!!!!!!!!!!!! post soon
Wow Flair you had me going for a second. But I know Bette would show up and save the day. Great story.
Oh, hell! Here we go, then… Right, I’ll fasten my seat belt! LOL! You are so bad! First give them a little “up” time before the big crash, OK? Thanks for this great update, and for not letting Tina screw up and get freaky with Jess.
i’m just happy to see your post. I’ll be looking forward to your never-easy-way-out….
OMG! Thanks for posted again WHOA! Thank God it’s not going to happen to sleep with Jess and Tina LOL! Your Scared ME about that Jess and Tina in the BED LOL! You doing Great job Thank you Please post soon.
Great chapter, please post soon.
K
Wonderful chapter as always. Glad Bette showed up. Love this.
oh don’t we all know it can never be easy. but can’t it be easy for a moment. does my fight and flight response have to be in overdrive with every post you ff writers post. glad bette made it, hoped she would. can’t wait for the next one.
I knew Bette would show!!! Oh I am so happy! Please give us at least a couple of happy chapters before the drama sets in again!
Megga- OH JEASE FAIR! Let them be happy for a bit eh? HAha, well, at least a chapter or two! Thanks for all the chapters, as always I look forward to reading more!
OOOOOOOOOOO the downside to fame! Keep it up Miss Flair, you know this story ROCKS!!! and you are certainly due for an nc17 chapter dedicated to TiBette! Yipeeee!!! lol
Ah, what a great drama specialist you are, making us tremble and be moved in turn, smile and sigh like in an endless rollercoaster ! Please continue this wonderful story, again and again… Love it more than ever !
As long as your writing, I’m reading.
YES bring on the drama, can’t wait to see your verison of the down side of life in the lime light. F did I hear you are posting again today??
Would Tina have? I guess we may never know. I’m just glad Bette showed up, and I’m preparing myself for the drama to come, after the NC17, that is.
Oh i mean I was screamin’ NOOOOOO.. LOL i thought the NC-17 was going to be Jess and Tinas ancounter.. ok enough rambling, off to read THE delisious next chappy..
Great update. Yippee, more drama and angst on the way. I’m drooling at the prospect of what’s to come!!
Damn i’m late.. you was screaming NOOOOOOO when Jess unhooked Tinas bra.. but then Bette was there..
OK i can’t comment on this one much, i soooooo wanna go read the next chapter..
Ah, life is never easy, right? But it it is the good times like this that make it worth it. Looking forward to the ups and downs. :)