Fan Fiction
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Chapter 10
(Bette) Thanks Dane, I’m sorry about this
(Dana smiles) Bette, don’t worry about it
(Shane) Do you want me to come with you?
Bette looks over at her and frowns.
(Bette) No, stay, please. Enjoy yourselves, I’ll be fine
They both nod as Bette rises from the table and makes a quiet exit.
Later, Bette is in her kitchen making herself a cup of tea. The doorbell rings and Bette glances at the clock on the kitchen wall as she makes her way to the front door. She opens the door to find Tina looking anxiously back at her.
(Tina) Hi
Bette looks at her for a moment before responding.
(Bette) Hi
(Tina) I’m sorry, I know it’s late, I just wanted to check you were OK
Bette steps back and gestures for her to come inside. Tina steps into the house and Bette closes the door behind them and they stand together by the front door, both looking at the other intently. Bette takes a breath before speaking.
(Bette) Tee, your fiancée is in town for one night, and you haven’t seen each other in weeks
Tina takes a breath and looks back at her, and Bette frowns.
(Bette) So what are you doing here with me?
(Tina) As I said I wanted to check that you were OK
(Bette) You could have sent any of the others to do that
They hold each other’s gaze for a moment, and Tina then looks downwards and shrugs.
(Tina) Fine, I’ll go then
Tina turns back to the door and reaches for the handle, and Bette steps towards her and places her hand against the door, holding it closed. Bette stands close behind her and speaks to Tina over her shoulder.
(Bette) You don’t look at her the way you look at me
Tina looks downwards and takes a breath. They hold that position for a moment and Tina then turns to face her, standing with her back against the door as Bette’s hand remains in place against it.
(Tina) Bette, what we had ended a very long time ago
Bette looks to her with her head leaned to one side.
(Bette) You’re looking at me like that right now
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Wow, what a great chapter. This Bette is very observant. Even though I want them to go further, I hope they stop and Tina has an honest conversation with Sara. Thanks for another chapter.
Always worth the wait!!! “Tina had always have IMPECCABLE taste!” :)
Loved the chapter. Thanks
It’s getting better and better. I love this story so much! Looking forward to more :)
I keep getting back at your stories… They are just…great, impeccable and you have an original take on the theme.