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Chapter 17
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(Tina) It’s fine baby, don’t worry about it
Tina leans in and kisses her, and then lowers her gaze and her eyes travel down Bette’s body.
(Tina) God you look good
Tina raises her eyes and they smile at each other for a moment, and she then lightly tugs on the towel until it falls to gather around Bette’s waist. Bette smiles at her and shakes her head slowly, and Tina bites her lip as she looks back at her.
(Tina) Hi
Bette gives a small laugh.
(Bette) Hi yourself
Tina places her hand on Bette’s stomach and pushes her slowly backwards. Bette’s back hits the wall and Tina kisses her firmly on the neck, and Bette smiles and speaks to her softly.
(Bette) There are a lot of people, just over there
(Tina smiles) I know
Tina drags her fingers slowly up Bette’s thighs.
(Tina) Do you think they’d mind very much if we made a detour upstairs?
Tina draws back and they smile at each other.
(Bette) I think they might
Bette smiles as she wraps her arms around Tina’s waist and pulls her closer, kissing her gently on the neck.
(Tina sighs) OK, I’ll behave myself
(Bette) I’m sure Helena’s already offside with the wait at the door, let’s try not to annoy her any more
(Tina smiles) OK
They both take a step back and reach for the other’s hand, and walk through the house together. Bette looks over to her as they approach the kitchen.
(Bette) You know, you could always have a key if you like. Might come in handy if you find yourself locked out again
Tina looks at her and Bette smiles as they come to a stop in the kitchen and turn to face each other. Bette places her hands on Tina’s hips and smiles at her.
(Bette) I just mean it might be convenient. It would have been just now, and it might be again
Bette raises her hands and smiles.
(Bette) Still not up to anything, I swear
Tina smiles as she moves her arms around Bette’s waist and pulls her closer.
(Tina) I know that
They both smile into a kiss. They are interrupted as Alice calls out to them as she steps through the door from the garden.
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I’m here! I’ve been waiting! Gonna read now. Whew!
Thanks, K. :))
Great to see a new chapter!
Still wonder a bit how they see this not as a committed relationship but if this is how it works for them, i am very happy for them.
Sad to read the story almost comes to an end.
Truly enjoy your stories!
Okay… so they have worked out that they are girlfriends indefinitely….. exclusive, in love but not committed. They can make plans together but not long-term plans. I’m not sure how they define long term but okay… perhaps it means not permenant such as buying a house together or getting married. They are fine as long as things are for convenience and not commitment. For me commitment is an expression of intent not a guarantee. Someone can say to you they will promise love you forever. They are expressing their intent and even pledging to use their best efforts to fulfill that promise. But there are no guarantees in life whatsoever. They are acting like a committed relationship just not labeling it as such. And by not labeling as such, they both can avoid their phobias of being in a committed relationship. They will both will be free to come and go as they wish and to lead the life they want to live. Just as in any committed relationship. As long as what they agree to is a matter of convenience not commitment at least in their perception, things will be fine. I guess my thoughts are how in the world did these two ever get to the concept that commitment was a trap of doing something they really did not want to do? I’m with Alice…. I’m not sure I understand. I’m not sure I ever will… but okay.
Thanks for the chapter…
Officially, “spring” is (sorta) here so good U took a much deserved break!!!
The missed calls, Tina taking too long outside… i seriously thought something bad was or had happened to Tina.
I originally had it that Tina left to go and pick up Helena and I realised it totally seemed like I was setting up for an accident! So I changed it but I guess the vibe is still there a bit hey? Sorry about that!
Hahaha yes! And i was thinking that the “accident” will knock some sense into tina about commitment! (Hihihi)
But then i read your notes, 1 chapter to go. (Aww,) We can’t squeeze an accident with just one chap to go.
Anyway, im great with the keys!
Great way to show how much Tina needs a key.
Great, all in love and Alice is confused as always ;)
I love them but they would both be devastated if they broke up so call it what you want they are already committed. Would love to know what causes Tina to be so afraid of commitment. What would happen if something happened to one of them and only family is allowed to visit etc?